Fic: Always

Feb 24, 2007 22:28

So, we're having the worst weather of the winter this weekend. Ice off and on all day, with snow tonight, coupled with lots of wind. Lots of people without power around the area, but so far mine is holding. *crosses fingers ( Read more... )

j/e fic

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rushingwind February 25 2007, 07:16:10 UTC
Heh, green hair... *giggles* Lovely little fic. :)

My only nitpick is that you're missing some kind of punctuation in the last sentence: "Can I help it I think you look hot with green hair..."

It should be "I can't help that I think you look hot with green hair", or "Can I help it? I think you look hot with green hair...", or maybe "I can't help it! I think you look hot with green hair..."

Anyway, it's a lovely little fic. :) I enjoyed it thoroughly. :)

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lady_xan February 25 2007, 15:10:01 UTC
Nitpick away! I don't mind because truthfully it's been so long since I've written on a regular basis that I know I'm rusty. Thanks for the comment!

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vickysg1 February 25 2007, 09:28:38 UTC
Lovely fic!

Green hair... *giggles*

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lady_xan February 25 2007, 15:12:07 UTC
Thanks vicky! Oh, she would look gorgeous no matter what, wouldn't she?

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alianne February 25 2007, 11:52:09 UTC
Heh. Very cute little fic!

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lady_xan February 25 2007, 15:12:49 UTC
Thank you!

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mizz_magenta February 25 2007, 14:58:55 UTC
OMGCUTE! And GREEN!!! She should wear a pink tee to the negotiations bc "pink goes good with green!" *g*

*gets off Wicked to leave a better comment* :P

I liked how you related her mood to the colour of the ocean, considering how much of her has become Atlantis.

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lady_xan February 25 2007, 15:19:03 UTC
You know, this started out a serious little fic with her black mood, but suddenly she had green hair and John was teasing her. Go figure. The Wicked was not planned at all, but I sure recognized it after the fact!

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mizz_magenta February 27 2007, 13:55:23 UTC
Hehe, that's how my last fic ended up. Started very dark and angsty...and quickly turned into fluff, lol. I think John and Lizzie want to remind us of why we love Sparky so much, hehe.

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abracah February 25 2007, 15:07:20 UTC
That was too cute. Very in character for both of them!

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lady_xan February 25 2007, 15:20:55 UTC
Thanks! It's always nice to hear they're in character. :)

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