Vignettes

[ladyadeone]

Just some bits of writing I wanted to save.

Comments

[meltintall3]

I really like the second short poem. I couldn't put my finger on why, but it made me smile. :)

[ladyadeone]

That one was slightly more fun than the others to write, too. It flowed more naturally. :)

[valiantarcher]

Nice work. :) The third one gets me---it sounds so conversational and a bit dramatic and then just drops humourously. ;)) I like the symmetry of the first one as well.

[ladyadeone]

Thanks! :D I really appreciate your opinions.