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Family Conspiracy: The Love Game

May 07, 2015 18:42

Title: Family Conspiracy: The Love Game Chapter Ten
Author: ladyaltaPairing: Ohmiya, Yama, Juntoshi, Ohba, Ohma, OhnoxKame ( Read more... )

rating: pg, p: ohno satoshi/kamenashi kazuya, p: ohno satoshi/sakurai sho, p: ohno satoshi/ikuta toma, title: the love game, c:ninomiya kazunari, c:ikuta toma, ohmiya, p: ohno satoshi/matsumoto jun, c:matsumoto jun, c:aiba masaki, p: ohno satoshi/aiba masaki, c:sakurai sho, c:kamenashi kazuya, arashi, p: ohno saotshi/ninomiya kazunari, p:ohno satoshi/ikuta toma, c:ohno satoshi, genre: au

Comments 19

littlebadlei May 7 2015, 11:09:23 UTC

EEEEEEHHHHH

what about then when he starts to remember?!
OH MY OHCHAN! You just got back from hospital xD
Oh dear… this was a big surprise!

Thanks for writing!!

ladyalta May 7 2015, 11:33:14 UTC

hah I know right! surprise, surprise! that's twist no. 2! the internet connection sucks at this time. the connection chooses a certain hour/time to work fine and to work as bad as it can be like right now. you know i think I have to practice writing long story line. I can't seem to lengthen a story. maybe because I got used to reading Tagalog pocketbooks which are usually ten chapters long so maybe I got it from them unlike romantic books like Judith McNaught and the likes which are thick and with overflowing plot.

anyway thanks for reading and commenting! :)

littlebadlei May 7 2015, 13:36:07 UTC

how many twist do you actually have for this??? xD
what's wrong with your internet.. really it's always messing up? :S

i don't know.. i think they're fine :) but if you feel that way, why not try? it's not a bad thing to try, i think :)

ladyalta May 7 2015, 14:37:10 UTC

i think this will be the last.

yep my internet just sucks like that.

thanks if you think that it's still fine even if my stories have actually short chapters.

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arashi4dream1 May 7 2015, 12:04:57 UTC

oh my!!! twist number 2 dear you got me 😋 this is getting so intriguing and Ochan feels the hots for Nino ... kyaaaa a wild Nino and peack of the honeymoon kyaaaa cant wait!

but also what would happen when Satoshi gets his memory back waaaaa

ladyalta May 7 2015, 12:29:09 UTC

hehehe nobody expected that ne?

thanks for reading and commenting! :)

jtaytt May 7 2015, 13:16:04 UTC

Getting worried about what will happen when ohno remembers....can't wait for the next chapter.

ladyalta May 7 2015, 13:35:41 UTC

thanks for reading and commenting! :)

mars_anch May 7 2015, 13:38:20 UTC

I'm afread what will happen when satoshi remember everythings

ladyalta May 7 2015, 14:26:51 UTC

everybody does but I assure you it will end well for Ohmiya.

thanks for reading and commenting!

naoki_hikari May 7 2015, 14:29:25 UTC

Yes YESSS YESSSSSS!!! Quick! Agree to that delicious plan Nino-chan! *tugging at Nino's sleeve*
Wonderful idea Ohchan! lol.
Soooo.. selective amnesia huh? Not bad not bad at all. I would say I like it! ;)
Now Ohno can let loose the beast and jump Nino!! *cackle madly*

Thanks for this! I got 1 more day and I'm free from midtest. Wish me luck! :D

ladyalta May 7 2015, 14:41:25 UTC

hahaha well he's just worried about one thing though and that's when Oh-chan's regains his memories back but then I assure you that it will end well with Ohmiya.

thanks for reading and commenting! :)