the shore [parts five to seven]

[ladyapplesauce]

Title: The Shore
Series: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairing: Rose Tyler & the Doctor
Word Count: 5,000 (total length is 13,000)

Continued from here

Comments

[ladyapplesauce]

*Is dead from your flattery!* Seriously, I am so happy you thought it was beautiful. Thank you :)

[ladyapplesauce]

Thank you so very, very much! I am just crazy pleased that you liked it <3

[ladyapplesauce]

OH WOW! What an honor. Thanks a million :)

[fannishliss]

crazy brilliant. the ideal doctor/rose story -- you restored them to each other! perfect!

YAY, OH YAY!

gorgeous, poetic, tense, emotional!

YOUR STORY HAS EVERYTHING. YOU RULE!!!

Oh, I'm so happy for them. GOSH!!!

One of my favorite parts:

“That’s new!” Rose exclaims, pointing to the screwdriver.

“Oh! You like it? It has claws!”

“Brilliant!” She laughs.

\o/ TEARS OF JOY, IT IS SO GOOD. \o/

[ladyapplesauce]

YAY! I am so glad you enjoyed it! The Doctor and Rose desperately needed to be restored to each other, and I'm so happy you thought I did it justice. I tried really hard to give the story a balance of longing, heartache, happiness, comedy... and I'm a poet by nature, so I think that always ends up playing into my prose. I just can't help it!

Oh, and that line was one of my favorites to write! It just came out so naturally. I can so see Eleven's face light up: "It has claws!"

<3

[wander_realtai]

Finished, and I absolutely loved it! Simply beautiful. Bravo!

[ladyapplesauce]

*Blushes* That makes me so happy! Thank you so much :)

[tempusborealis]

Oh this was stunning. I couldn't tell you any one thing that I liked - it was all absolutely beautiful. Your prose is gorgeous, so meaningful. I love this whole thing, and it's definitely the best 11/Rose story I've ever read. I can't even. <3

Also, I love Cummings. One of my favorite composers, Eric Whitacre, has done some really lovely setting of his pieces. I'm not a fan of some of Cummings stuff and some of his stuff Whitacre has set, but I highly suggest "the moon is hiding in her hair". http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=A4AwQMwIpz8#!

[ladyapplesauce]

Oh goodness gracious, a million thank yous for saying such sweet things! I can't quite believe you think this was the best Eleven/Rose story, but I am absolutely honored <3

I just adore Cummings and I can't wait to check out this link! I've got a couple of sleepyheads in my house right now, and can't seem to find my headphones, but as soon as I can, I'll give your link a listen! Thank you thank you thank you!

[ladyapplesauce]

Well THAT was just lovely. Thanks so much for sharing!