Oooh, wow, going back to ACME without their memories.... poor everyone! Aww, Greg wanting help with the paperwork... And Sean bickering slightly with Mrs. P. *snerk*
I like that even with altered memories, Greg and Scott still know each other. :)
And aww, I like that the Chief believes them, despite the changed memories! But gah, Scott admitting that he's afraid of Charleston and the Chief realizing that they need to go there... *hugs him* But he doesn't want the others to go without him, aww....
Aww, them reminiscing about the things they should be doing in the alley.... *snerks at the mention of the glued pyramid*
And gah, Elliott can hear the spirit! And then all of him see him and Scott realizes who he is...
Elliott! D:
But yay for Scott determining that he will go to save Elliott with Sean and Barry with him! Save him, Scott, save him!
Awesome chapter--it was great to see this fic revived!
Yeah, definitely a bittersweet thing. But the more things change, the more they stay the same....
I brought that in at the end of chapter 7, and then realized I needed to go back and make references to Greg at earlier points, which I did. But I still wonder, as I did then, if it looks too strange to only bring Greg in now....
It was fun writing for the Chief and having her be an immediate ally. :) And **hugs Scott too.** Poor Scott.... But yes, loyalty trumps fear!
LOL.
Definitely creepy. And poor Elliott! Poor everyone!
Yes, Elliott must be saved!
Thanks! I'm glad I was able to get a new chapter written. Hopefully it won't be too hard to come up with the climax.
Thanks! I've already started it. Still not sure how the climatic fight will go, though, especially since I'm trying to keep hurt/comfort levels down, unlike the original outline....
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I like that even with altered memories, Greg and Scott still know each other. :)
And aww, I like that the Chief believes them, despite the changed memories! But gah, Scott admitting that he's afraid of Charleston and the Chief realizing that they need to go there... *hugs him* But he doesn't want the others to go without him, aww....
Aww, them reminiscing about the things they should be doing in the alley.... *snerks at the mention of the glued pyramid*
And gah, Elliott can hear the spirit! And then all of him see him and Scott realizes who he is...
Elliott! D:
But yay for Scott determining that he will go to save Elliott with Sean and Barry with him! Save him, Scott, save him!
Awesome chapter--it was great to see this fic revived!
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I brought that in at the end of chapter 7, and then realized I needed to go back and make references to Greg at earlier points, which I did. But I still wonder, as I did then, if it looks too strange to only bring Greg in now....
It was fun writing for the Chief and having her be an immediate ally. :) And **hugs Scott too.** Poor Scott.... But yes, loyalty trumps fear!
LOL.
Definitely creepy. And poor Elliott! Poor everyone!
Yes, Elliott must be saved!
Thanks! I'm glad I was able to get a new chapter written. Hopefully it won't be too hard to come up with the climax.
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Ahh, I need to go back and reread the old chapter. Nah, it didn't seem strange.
Yessss.
*hugs Elliott and everyone*
I'm sure it'll be great!
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**does too!**
Thanks! I've already started it. Still not sure how the climatic fight will go, though, especially since I'm trying to keep hurt/comfort levels down, unlike the original outline....
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I wouldn't blame Scott for being afraid of going there
Double Trouble willing to sit in a holding cell? lols oh that reminds me I need to work on a new ending for the season 1 finale
ooooo you MEAN OLD SPIRIT YOU I need a proton pack!
cool Louie is so understanding
Go guys! go save El
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Yep, especially when he doesn't remember.
LOL.
Samuel Lyons, always nasty and vindictive and cruel!
I hope Louie makes sense with the way I previously wrote him.... I always intended for him to genuinely care about Scott.
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