Gah, poor everyone in this! *hugs them all* Scott collapsing and Snakes looking after him, and then Scott revealing what had happened, and Elliott half out of his mind with worry... gah! And aww, Snakes willing to help them and Elliott insisting it's not Scott's fault...
Elliott always finding the horrific things and Barry walking in, dazed... more gah!
Oooh, the flashback... the beginnings of the song (which, knowing you, will have a role to play later, I'm sure), and the discussion of the mission (o hai mention of Ginger and Lou!), the callbacks to Caelius and ooh, Jeff might even be showing up later...
And gah, Sean waking up to Mendoza telling him that the others are gone and thinking it was his fault! *hugs him again*
**hugs them too!** Snakes will probably turn up now and again in the present-day scenes.
So much heartache for everybody ... gah!
Yep, the song will be important. And Ginger and Lou (and Mike) will probably wander in and out of the plot. And Jeff likely will, too; when I was re-reading the stories I did with him, I found I kind of liked him there, although I'm still not sure I want to actually write him as being in the group/ACME.
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oh no not another cult
oooooo you jerk of a doctor you well at least it isn't Portman
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This doctor is pretty creepy too, but true, he really has nothing on Portman.
Thank you!
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Elliott always finding the horrific things and Barry walking in, dazed... more gah!
Oooh, the flashback... the beginnings of the song (which, knowing you, will have a role to play later, I'm sure), and the discussion of the mission (o hai mention of Ginger and Lou!), the callbacks to Caelius and ooh, Jeff might even be showing up later...
And gah, Sean waking up to Mendoza telling him that the others are gone and thinking it was his fault! *hugs him again*
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So much heartache for everybody ... gah!
Yep, the song will be important. And Ginger and Lou (and Mike) will probably wander in and out of the plot. And Jeff likely will, too; when I was re-reading the stories I did with him, I found I kind of liked him there, although I'm still not sure I want to actually write him as being in the group/ACME.
Poor Sean ... gah. **hugs him!**
Thank you!
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