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A Change in My Life, 9/?

Oct 23, 2015 05:10

Title: A Change in My Life, chapter nine
Fandom: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego?
Rating: T/PG-13
Word Count: 4,778
Main Characters: Fictional Rockapella (Sean, Scott, Elliott, Barry), Jeff, Greg, Mr. Gordon, Scott's imposter
Summary: Showdown in a Boston cemetery.

( Take Me Away )

a change in my life, where in the world is carmen sandiego?

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i_heart_rocka October 23 2015, 13:05:55 UTC

ah what an awesome treat to wake up to

For a second there I thought it was the voice talking to El, just another spirit annoyed with the doubles antics

somehow I had a feeling that it would involve them singing

yeah beat it you old butthurt spirit

but what happens now?

insaneladybug October 24 2015, 00:09:15 UTC

Thank you!

LOL. That would have been interesting.

Ha, you knew more than I did, then. I only got that inspiration early this morning.

There will be another long chapter of conversations as everybody sorts things out. There may or may not be an actual epilogue following that chapter, depending on if everything gets fixed in that chapter or if there are still loose ends.

rose_of_pollux October 24 2015, 01:40:03 UTC

Ah, wow, I thought the song was something you'd planned from the start!

insaneladybug October 24 2015, 01:50:50 UTC

If I was, I forgot it. LOL. My memory is that I never did figure out how to defeat the spirit until hours ago.

rose_of_pollux October 23 2015, 13:14:44 UTC

Oooh, poor Elliott, ending up in there and seeing Lyons there! (Hmm, I think this is the first time you've mentioned his name in the context of a story, isn't it? Though this would be the perfect one to do so). His plan is so evil, ugh, forcing Scott to watch him take out the others! But it's definitely good to see him frustrated that he wasn't able to tear them apart ( ... )

insaneladybug October 24 2015, 00:02:10 UTC

(Yep, I think so. I never did before because I was going to use him in that novel, but I don't really think I'll ever write that novel. Too depressing. Although maybe I could overhaul the ending, but since the whole thing was inspired by a grave that said "Two Brothers", not having those characters die would kind of decimate the entire inspiration ( ... )

rose_of_pollux October 24 2015, 01:39:42 UTC

Ahh. *hugs* for the novel not going anywhere. Maybe someday you'll get the inspiration for another book. Unless the grave could be a premonition/future they have to work against?

Indeed.

Ahh. Hmm.

*nodnod* It worked very well!

Yay for Elliott charging in to save the day! Yesss, it definitely was a lovely contrast to before! :)

Ahh, nice!

insaneladybug October 24 2015, 01:49:38 UTC

**hugs back.** That was never my main novel project, at least, but the main one hasn't gone much of anywhere either. Heh. And that's an interesting thought! I wasn't planning for the Revolutionary War one to have anything supernatural in it, but that is a good idea. I may have to think strongly about it. Thanks!

I definitely loved how it all turned out. :)

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