Tell me to stop

Oct 18, 2007 19:50

 
It was a cold winters day I met him for training. Preciously cutting into my training with Colin but he insisted when he rang me at 5am that morning that we meet here in an hour. It had being snowing all night and the ground outside was covered in slush . Finally I reached the studio tracking through the entrance in wet trainers and combats thank ( Read more... )

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alicamel October 18 2007, 19:10:56 UTC
Pretty good! There should always be more dancing fic! There are a few punctuation/formatting problems which is a bit distracting, but otherwise this was a lovely suprise on my flist. :)

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ladycblack October 18 2007, 19:20:54 UTC
Aw thanks i just posted it up on the new rpf community actually didn't mean to put it one here as well lol
Yeah i know my punctuation is awful always was i got a b in english a-level! lol
But yeah first ever piece so not to bad i hope

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alicamel October 18 2007, 19:26:00 UTC
Oh, oops! I've done that myself before!

It might be worth finding a beta reader who can edit punctuation and that for you, if you find it tricky? I'm pretty bad at it as well, my poor beta has to put up with alot!

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ladycblack October 18 2007, 19:42:17 UTC
Yeah good idea!
Thanks

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alicamel November 6 2007, 09:42:14 UTC
Hiya, I saw you posted on beta_search, and I just wondered if you ever found a beta reader? If not, I thought I would offer! You can email me (alicamel@gmail.com) if you want to have a chat about it. :)

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