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[ladyeclectic79]

Omg someone's reviewed my work!! I can't read it yet, I can tell by the first line there's a few negatives. Later, I'll read it later....

I love Chris Crocker, and I don't care that I'm only fan #227088

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[lmurph524]

Well? How'd the critique read?
I have two chapters of my first draft sitting on my table with critique notes on them... I haven't read them yet. A little nervous about it. Okay a lot! :)

[ladyeclectic79]

Either I didn't have many positives or this guy's a negative-only critiquer, but he really did bring up a few points. You still want to read it?

[lmurph524]

Sure. Pop over an e-mail.