help me out and read this?

[ladyfiend]

okay, so I have to write something for school in the style of an author I chose. my author is Chuck Palahniuk, who I looove. if you have a little bit of time, would you be a dear and read this and tell me what you think? silly me, leaving this until last minute.. oops. anyway, it's supposed to imitate his writing. constructive criticism is

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[ladyfiend]

thank you! and yeah, I'm really glad our teacher let us choose our author. it made it much more interesting, I think.

[indieloverocks]

It's just like mr. palahniuk but you put your own spin on it. i like it!

also, i went to go see CHOKE. you should do yourself a favor and go see it, it's really amazing.

how are things going with the boy?

<3

[ladyfiend]

aww thank you :)

and choke isn't even playing in my city! ugh, how disappointing. I might have to take a trip to somewhere nearby though, because I reeeally want to see it!

as for the boy, things are getting better. we've been hanging out and stuff which is nice. the trust still isn't fully back, but that's to be expected I think. thank you for asking <3

[foolish_somnium]

I know this is late, butb still,I really liked it.It had Chuck's irony and sarcasm,and also facts, which he likes to add to his writings.So that the reader can learn something.I think you did a great job!

[ladyfiend]

thank you for reading it anyway! i had to read it to the class yesterday (i was so nervous, haha) and i ended up changing the ending a little. glad you liked it :)