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Needing is One Thing (Getting is Another) 2/2

Sep 28, 2010 11:23

( Needing is One Thing (Getting is Another) 2/2 )

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greenpunchbuggy September 29 2010, 01:47:53 UTC

...I think I'm in love. With every word of this story. Because it's so well-crafted and well-done. I felt like I was reading a novel, because of the good pacing and characterization. Great job!

mirrorskippy October 2 2010, 01:34:14 UTC

The pacing was hard to judge considering we were trading off each bit every single day for about 2 weeks there, so it's nice to know it doesn't seem rushed or off.

Thank you!

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mirrorskippy October 2 2010, 01:35:56 UTC

Sherlock knows John takes no prisoners, because he is SUCH a BAMF.

We really need to lay off Lestrade and Co. in the next part, I think we called them some variation of stupid monkeys about once every 5 paragraphs *g*

Thanks!

madrona_8 September 29 2010, 03:59:20 UTC

That was incredible. The part that really intrigued me was John knowing( he did know) that he cared for Sherlock so much that he wanted Sherlock to be sure. No doubts. Because I could see Sherlock jumping in and then going "Well, that's a distraction"

mirrorskippy September 30 2010, 21:45:11 UTC

Because I could see Sherlock jumping in and then going "Well, that's a distraction"

Yes, THIS. In all honesty I don't think that's a concern John is just going to let go of either - which is such a fun, angsty dynamic to play with *g*

Your comment is awesome, thank you, the end.

gomusing September 29 2010, 04:43:03 UTC

Simply brilliant. The tension and the pressure in the events that lead to Sherlock's kidnapping and Moriarty's game are brilliantly written. The same as John's feelings for Sherlock in the end and Mycroft's worrying.

mirrorskippy October 2 2010, 01:37:08 UTC

I LOVE DI'S MYCROFT. IT RENDERS ME LOUD AND INCOHERENT. His worrying is so adorable and yet terrifying, for sure.

Thank you so much!

batgurl10 September 29 2010, 14:38:18 UTC

I cant think of a witty enough way to say how MUCH I enjoyed reading this!!! I was sad to see it end, I woulda been happy to dive into this fic and never come up. I loved how you showcased their feelings for one another while still be So freaking IN character. and that ending!!!!! why did it have to end???

XD

Oh, and your MYCROFT???? I ADORED your mycroft! his anger was CHILLING! I hope we get this on show?!

mirrorskippy October 2 2010, 01:38:23 UTC

There may (very likely) be a sequel! This was so much fun to write, we're not ready to let it go either *g*

MYCROFT IS WIN THE END. 900% MORE MYCROFT NEEDED NEXT SEASON, FOR SURE.

Thank you!