Sometimes, I just wish my emotions would GO AWAY, because, ugh. Let's pretend it's normal that I cried a little? :D and not just once
I mean. Of course the porn is HOT and the whole plot is just AWESOME, but my favorite scene will always be Gee staring in the mirror, like She isn't anyone's girlfriend. Really, Gee should embrace this. She should just give up on the whole idea of a boyfriend-partner-whatever. GAH, that hurt.
And Frankie telling her how gorgeous Gee is, that was just too much.
AND STUPID LJ WHY DID YOU SEND MY COMMENT WHEN IT WASN'T FINISHED? YOU STUPID FUCKER. Well, at least you get two comments instead of just one? :D
Yeah, okay, that was too much. Because it's just so beautiful and I'm a lesbian virgin with a low self-confidence, so this just touched my heart and made me shiver. IN THE GOOD WAY, of course. And I loved how clueless Gee was the whole time, thinking that Frankie hooked up with Mikey. And then how much she cared about her, when she saw Mikey making out with Pete. UGH UGH UGH. ALL THE FEELINGS.
And, yeah. This was pretty much perfect and I loved it SO FUCKING MUCH. I can see this story as a "reread all the fucking time just because I can and because it's flawless" sorta thing.
I LOVED THIS. I can't even tell you how much, actually, BUT ALL THE LOVE I HOLD FOR THIS FIC MAKES MY HEART ACHE. SERIOUSLY. Gah. So wonderful. <3
Oh wow, I mean, I didn't write this fic to try to make people cry but an emotional reaction like that to something I wrote is a huge compliment. Thank you for sharing that.
The scene where Gee looks in the mirror, comes straight from the mix. It will always tie in my mind with the line I wish I could take back the woman you stole because that's exactly what that felt like to me, and what i wanted to portray. I'm not usually great with angst so I'm moved that it had such an affect on you.
Because it's just so beautiful and I'm a lesbian virgin with a low self-confidence, so this just touched my heart and made me shiver. IN THE GOOD WAY, of course. I'm so glad this fic worked for you in a good way! And I'm touched that it meant so much to you. Thanks for sharing so much of yourself in this comment and I really hope the fic stands up to many rereads.
OH MAN OH MAN. THIS STORY. <3333333 God, I fucking LOVE always-a-girl!fic SO MUCH, and this was just - god, this was SO FUCKING AMAZING, I can't even. I don't know where to START. I love the atmosphere, and the FEEL of it. I love Gee here so much - she's so unsure of herself, and clearly so AWESOME and BEAUTIFUL and I really love how we see her through Frankie's eyes, almost, and Mikey's, because she is JUST that clueless. <333
( ... )
"Maybe? Um, sort of? Mikey doesn't exactly date, but you guys-" Gee doesn't get any more words out before Frankie cuts her off.
"Oh my god, no. Gee, babe, I don't do dick."
*FIST PUMP* LOVE ITTTTTTTTTT
Their first kiss is SO BEAUTIFUL and I love that Frankie is letting Gee explore and GET there, because she got there a WHILE AGO and Gee just needs to catch up. LOVE that. <3333
Frankie's fingers curl into Gee's shoulder and she pulls her close, enough so their bodies touch, the soft rise of Frankie's breasts meeting her own through layers of clothing. Gee makes a soft noise and slides her other hand to Frankie's back, pulling until the press is a crush and they're necking.
LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOVE that moment where it just TURNS. <3333
The ride home is awkward.
*giggles* NO SHIT. I love how you handled that - it's always so hard to keep the tension going after a break in a scene, but you did it REALLY FUCKING WELL, and I adored the image of Mikey dragging Pete away. <3333
Also this:
"Your brother is kind of a slut," she says,
( ... )
Frankie's hands are in Gee's hair before she’s even halfway there, easing her legs open and Gee has to stop for a moment just to look because god, what a view.
*FLAPPY HANDS OF FLAP AHHHHH* YESSSSSSSSS that is SO PERFECT. The whole section of Gee going down on Frankie is SO FUCKING HOT, I don't know what to DO WITH IT, ahhhh, it's so perfect. *_____* Just just just. YES.
Gee rides it out, holding tight to Frankie's hip with her free hand, and not easing off. She works Frankie's clit, feeling it tremble under her tongue as Frankie slick flesh grips her fingers, and god, it's fucking intense. It's like she's coming herself, and she moans into Frankie's skin, sucking in air through her nose and Frankie's all she can smell.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"Fuck, you've got another one in you, don't you?" Frankie whispers, sounding delighted and turned on. This just about KILLED me. I love that they just don't STOP, they keep going, and it's clearly one of those nights where you just can't sleep because everything else is SO MUCH MORE
( ... )
DEAR GOD WOMAN THIS COMMENT. THIS SERIES OF COMMENTS. I've kind of been all *HANDS* about replying because I just don't know how to respond to something so EPIC. I mean GUH. This is amazing. THANK YOU.
It means a RIDICULOUS amount to me that you liked the story so much, because I know how much you love the mix. Hell, I know how much I love the mix, but I was so NERVOUS about writing this, because femslash isn't exactly my forte - hell female characters are not so much my forte - and like, I didn't even particularly set out to make it f/f, I just really wanted to write always-a-girl!Gee, because IDK, I guess SHE was kind of in my comfort zone to start with after having written her before with the whole Punk-Ass Threesome 'verse. So when I knew I had to write a female protagonist I started with HER
( ... )
A million days late, but seriously, this is SO delightful and SO hot. I love how Gee has to figure out how to get over Pedicone herself and, when she does, that Frank's there waiting. I love that they have fun, because that's something that is just sadly missing in so much fic - and sex IS fun, you know? - so it's great to see it here. Ugh. So good.
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I mean. Of course the porn is HOT and the whole plot is just AWESOME, but my favorite scene will always be Gee staring in the mirror, like
She isn't anyone's girlfriend. Really, Gee should embrace this. She should just give up on the whole idea of a boyfriend-partner-whatever.
GAH, that hurt.
And Frankie telling her how gorgeous Gee is, that was just too much.
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Yeah, okay, that was too much. Because it's just so beautiful and I'm a lesbian virgin with a low self-confidence, so this just touched my heart and made me shiver. IN THE GOOD WAY, of course. And I loved how clueless Gee was the whole time, thinking that Frankie hooked up with Mikey. And then how much she cared about her, when she saw Mikey making out with Pete. UGH UGH UGH. ALL THE FEELINGS.
And, yeah. This was pretty much perfect and I loved it SO FUCKING MUCH. I can see this story as a "reread all the fucking time just because I can and because it's flawless" sorta thing.
I LOVED THIS. I can't even tell you how much, actually, BUT ALL THE LOVE I HOLD FOR THIS FIC MAKES MY HEART ACHE. SERIOUSLY. Gah. So wonderful. <3
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The scene where Gee looks in the mirror, comes straight from the mix. It will always tie in my mind with the line I wish I could take back the woman you stole because that's exactly what that felt like to me, and what i wanted to portray. I'm not usually great with angst so I'm moved that it had such an affect on you.
Because it's just so beautiful and I'm a lesbian virgin with a low self-confidence, so this just touched my heart and made me shiver. IN THE GOOD WAY, of course. I'm so glad this fic worked for you in a good way! And I'm touched that it meant so much to you. Thanks for sharing so much of yourself in this comment and I really hope the fic stands up to many rereads.
Thank you so SO much. This means a lot. ♥
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"Oh my god, no. Gee, babe, I don't do dick."
*FIST PUMP* LOVE ITTTTTTTTTT
Their first kiss is SO BEAUTIFUL and I love that Frankie is letting Gee explore and GET there, because she got there a WHILE AGO and Gee just needs to catch up. LOVE that. <3333
Frankie's fingers curl into Gee's shoulder and she pulls her close, enough so their bodies touch, the soft rise of Frankie's breasts meeting her own through layers of clothing. Gee makes a soft noise and slides her other hand to Frankie's back, pulling until the press is a crush and they're necking.
LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOVE that moment where it just TURNS. <3333
The ride home is awkward.
*giggles* NO SHIT. I love how you handled that - it's always so hard to keep the tension going after a break in a scene, but you did it REALLY FUCKING WELL, and I adored the image of Mikey dragging Pete away. <3333
Also this:
"Your brother is kind of a slut," she says, ( ... )
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*FLAPPY HANDS OF FLAP AHHHHH* YESSSSSSSSS that is SO PERFECT. The whole section of Gee going down on Frankie is SO FUCKING HOT, I don't know what to DO WITH IT, ahhhh, it's so perfect. *_____* Just just just. YES.
Gee rides it out, holding tight to Frankie's hip with her free hand, and not easing off. She works Frankie's clit, feeling it tremble under her tongue as Frankie slick flesh grips her fingers, and god, it's fucking intense. It's like she's coming herself, and she moans into Frankie's skin, sucking in air through her nose and Frankie's all she can smell.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"Fuck, you've got another one in you, don't you?" Frankie whispers, sounding delighted and turned on. This just about KILLED me. I love that they just don't STOP, they keep going, and it's clearly one of those nights where you just can't sleep because everything else is SO MUCH MORE ( ... )
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It means a RIDICULOUS amount to me that you liked the story so much, because I know how much you love the mix. Hell, I know how much I love the mix, but I was so NERVOUS about writing this, because femslash isn't exactly my forte - hell female characters are not so much my forte - and like, I didn't even particularly set out to make it f/f, I just really wanted to write always-a-girl!Gee, because IDK, I guess SHE was kind of in my comfort zone to start with after having written her before with the whole Punk-Ass Threesome 'verse. So when I knew I had to write a female protagonist I started with HER ( ... )
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