Broken or Fixed?

[ladygaffes]

Title: Broken or Fixed?
Length: MultiChaptered.
Author:ladygaffes
Genre: Romance, Family.
Pairing: YooSu.
Rating: Pg-13
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys, only the plot is mine.

Warning: unbeta-ed, a lot of grammar mistakes.

Summary : Nélia develops a wild plan to keep her parents from breaking up.
Nélia was very clever for her age, she have an active

Comments

[cutie_ass]

Nelia, such a nice name hihi. Go!Nelia, save ur parents from possible divorce?

[ladygaffes]

i like the name, it was my late daughters' name. Thank you for reading.

[susuie]

I miss fics with family theme along with yoosu's kids..hope you can update soon..
and for baby Nelia, save your parents~~go!go!

[ladygaffes]

Yes Family themed fictions are my fav. Thank you for reading, I'll update soon.

[ladygaffes]

Thank you for reading, let's hope that Nélia will succeed.

[dieter17]

Nelia~ She's really an amazing kid.
What's YS's prob here? They've married and had a kid, what else his parents could do?
Next chap is a "must-watch" ^^
YooSu with their children, miss this so much.

[ladygaffes]

Thank you for reading, I'll update soon.

[ichigotabetai]

A good beginning. Yes, it needs a beta and grammar check and also punctuation but do continue ! I am interested to see where you go with this and what kind of a plan Nelia can come up with.

What does Nelia mean ?

Also, one slight....erm...correction.

"Yoochun; her daddy; didn't do her before going to school this morning."

Please change 'do' to 'dress or any other verb. Do is slang for erm...other things.

Thank you

[ladygaffes]

I meant doing her hair.

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. I'll try my best and pay more attention.

Re: Thank you

[ichigotabetai]

Ooo....awesome in that case. ^_^ Yoochun would be an awesome dad to girls. I remember from that photoshoot for some clothing brand.

Do tell me what Nelia means !

Re: Thank you

[ladygaffes]

it means Little Flower :)