The Broken Edge, Chapter 62: Downfall

Jun 24, 2017 09:27

 Luke arrives on the scene with Alora and things go to hell.

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pronker June 24 2017, 15:32:18 UTC
Tight confrontation - liked the for everyone's good bit of Luke's thinking. Ben does seem to take everything personally, and yet that's his character. That makes the drama, I suppose.

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ladyhadhafang June 27 2017, 23:26:57 UTC
Pronker! Hi! :D *Hugs*

And thank you so much. I figured that would be in Luke's character, trying to do this for everyone's good.

That's a really interesting observation re: Ben. (Seriously, I love your comments. They're always very insightful and bring up ideas I didn't think of before. :) I think he's just plain torn apart -- sort of torn between his uncle and someone who was a very dear friend. But he definitely does have a penchant for taking things personally, which also comes into play here.

Again, thank you so much!

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pronker June 28 2017, 01:22:22 UTC
Aw, that's nice to hear! It's enjoyable to fine tune the perceptions that writing gives me and I like to bounce them off folks, in particular the author.

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ladyhadhafang June 30 2017, 03:13:07 UTC
No problem. Seriously, you do it beautifully. :3

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