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sapphyra00 May 21 2006, 07:16:15 UTC
I love this!

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ladyhyacinth May 21 2006, 08:07:27 UTC
Thankyou. :)

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m_chandler May 21 2006, 12:43:53 UTC
wonderful very erotic yet very tasteful

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ladyhyacinth May 21 2006, 21:33:08 UTC
Thankyou :)

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tedwords May 21 2006, 15:01:29 UTC
I like it! Nice imagery, word usage, and sentence structure.

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ladyhyacinth May 21 2006, 21:22:01 UTC
Thankyou :)

For all of the above, I agree with you for a change.

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legacy_of_love May 21 2006, 16:55:54 UTC
simply wonderful!

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ladyhyacinth May 21 2006, 21:20:50 UTC
Thankyou :)

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venusiavix May 21 2006, 20:28:28 UTC
i giggled with the disclaimer, floated in the undertow of the music, made love to my teeth with my tongue after your suggestion, caught myself, smiled, and continued. then i smiled again.

you write beautifully piercing prose.

the bit of cheiromancy...precisely where you mounted the mount of venus...made me shiver. and the end awakened the asphixiaphile in me.

p.s. i was gone over the weekend...this was one of the first things i read since i've come back...a wonderful reintroduction.

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ladyhyacinth May 21 2006, 21:17:08 UTC
I have missed you this weekend, the days seemed somewhat quieter in a way?

Thankyou.. Im sorry Im just really tired this morning and my back is being a bitch with a stiff twinge in it, and theres nothing more that I'd like than to go back to bed.

Thankyou sweetheart.

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