Look After Your brother Ch 18

Jun 02, 2005 22:49


Chapter 18 )

bds, layb

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dejectedmadness June 3 2005, 06:05:22 UTC
This is starting to get really yummy and good. I hate having to wait for more, but I guess if it takes so long to make it so good, I will. You're doing a brilliant job.

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ladyjanelly June 3 2005, 12:14:26 UTC
thankyou, thankyou.

Glad you're enjoying it.

Yeah, as the end gets closer, the writing is more...dense? it takes more to get it right, and I have less room to fix things if they arent. It does take more time and energy. I think that's why I've been writing some of the little one-shots as I go. Stress relief.

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ladyjanelly June 3 2005, 12:12:51 UTC
Why oh why won't Connor just love him (physically) if he does all this for him, to him?

Because Murphy hasn't asked. :)

I know I said next chapter for Murphy's reasons, but um, (looks at the file) probably in 20.

Hopefully the brothers of the fic will develop into the brothers of the movie by the end. If I do it right.

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Hmm...(kinda long, sorry) nettle1981 June 15 2005, 06:53:58 UTC
Okie, already said Boondock is my fav. movie. This is such an unexpected prequel, but. Wow! You have so captured Murp. and Conner ( ... )

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ladyjanelly June 15 2005, 23:33:07 UTC
Heya, I don't have your phone number. Call me when you get this, re:getting the car ( ... )

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nettle1981 June 16 2005, 05:09:05 UTC
Erm, heh. So used to the world working off those stupid cellphones. (Yes, I have one. It's actually cheaper than a house phone.) 817/two nine six, eight six seven seven. (Bot's apparently hunt numbers.) Yup. That's the scene. He just seemed weaker than I'd expect.

I can't say I've ever wanted to write fanfic. I used to write alot of poetry/prose and have begun to attempt shorties do to a Hemingway inspired brain-fart. I think I've got a young-adultish one on my LJ somewhere. Fanfic, well, to be honest, fanfic will never, ever, ever get a chance to see a publisher. Guy I know, (Robert Lessig, semi-famous teacher at Naropa Institute. We used to "chill" at poetry slams.) told me once that it's ok to have passion. It's not ok to keep it to yourself. :-)

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