The Weapon, ch 5/? Kept!verse

[ladyjanelly]

 Karl Urban/Matt Damon, set in poisontaster's Kept!verse.
Concrit would be deeply appreciated.
I think the soundtrack for this fic is all Portishead.
Thank you to trishabooms for holding my hand for this one. :)

Comments

[embroiderama]

YAY to more of this. I love the awkwardness of the dance between the two of them, the way control passes back and forth between them.

[ladyjanelly]

Heh. Thanks. :)

[ladyjanelly]

They are a fun dynamic to write. Karl's very interesting where and when he'll make his stands and where he'll bend.

So glad you're enjoying it.

[twelve_pastels]

*squeaks*

I really enjoy the awkwardness of their interactions, how they're sounding each other out at the same time as planning this massive operation. The balance between them is fascinating.

[ladyjanelly]

They really are a fun dynamic to write. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for commenting.

[1orelei]

Holy cr*p. And apologies for the profanity.

Thanks for putting up with my inanity last installment. And this is - this is powerful. I mean you're always engaging to the point of reader obsession with crafting your characters... but all of a sudden I feel like I'm watching an action movie too. Which is odd wear and tear on the emotions when it happens in five minute installments. ;)

[ladyjanelly]

Thanks for putting up with my inanity last installment.

No, not at all. It helps, believe it or not. At least it gives me targets to aim at, even if I don't know if they're out of my range yet.

This is probably my most action-oriented fic since Rollerball. :) It's an interesting stretch for my writing to try to balance the interactions between the characters with their achieving their outside goal together.

[lomer]

This is so good!

[ladyjanelly]

Yay! Glad you're diggin' it. :)

[pinbot72]

I am so intrigued by Karl. He is my favorite kind of stoic sexy. Yum. Great fic!