Comments | ladyjanelly: FIC: Re-cast (scar!verse), ch 11/? rated PG Jensen/Jared

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FIC: Re-cast (scar!verse), ch 11/? rated PG Jensen/Jared

Jul 07, 2007 12:51

Title: Re-cast (scar!verse) ch 11/?
Author: Ladyjanelly
Rating: PG
Characters: Jensen/Jared,
Summary: Jensen stopped acting in 2000. He still runs into Jared.
Warning: Men sexing men, AU.
Disclaimer: Never happened, not my boys.
Feedback: Is always appreciated-- praise, crit, all of it.

Thanks to
misskatieleigh for the quick beta.

( Their Sundays together are a given at this point... )

re-cast, j2, spn rps, scar!verse

Comments 69

snookscribbles July 7 2007, 22:18:36 UTC

Love this series, but this installment touched me deeply. I love the "daily-ness" of the special and stressful moments potrayed. The blissful day in the park and the not-fight fight are both such believable parts of an evolving relationship.

Beautiful.

ladyjanelly July 8 2007, 01:20:56 UTC

Thanks. It was tricky, balancing the domesticity and the stress. I still wasn't 100% satisfied with the chapter, but it worked.

I really wanted this fic to be about real-feeling people in a real-feeling relationship. I'm so thrilled when I get reviews like yours. :)

misskatieleigh July 7 2007, 23:14:58 UTC

You already know I liked this, but I'll tell you again anyways. I like the additions you made from what I read yesterday also. :D

ladyjanelly July 8 2007, 01:29:30 UTC

Yay! I didn't feel like I'd added all that much. Glad it worked.

c_ntbucket July 8 2007, 00:56:54 UTC

I'm sure the boys will get through it, everyone has there ups and downs.
Its an excellent chapter and i love all the emotion and love that was shown at the park. The boys clearly love each other.
Cant wait for more darl.
:DD

ladyjanelly July 8 2007, 17:10:33 UTC

Glad the schmoop and angst seemed balanced.

Glad you enjoyed it.

grackles July 8 2007, 03:40:37 UTC

YAY, MORE OF THIS STORY! This is nepenthene, by the way.

ladyjanelly July 8 2007, 17:11:19 UTC

Damn you and gin and your look-alike usernames!

:)

Glad you're enjoying it.

grackles July 8 2007, 17:14:22 UTC

It's all part of our plan to merge into the largest annoying presence on livejournal. Hmm. I wonder if backnblack and back_n_black are available. WE COULD TAKE OVER THE WORLD.

softgraysky July 8 2007, 04:01:59 UTC

YAY! More scar!verse!

I'm too tired to give you any feedback save, "OMG YES!"

I love withdrawn Jensen, even if its brief, and look! There's angst! (even if its just a little).

*dances*

You're good, darling, really good. :D

ladyjanelly July 8 2007, 17:48:38 UTC

Heh. Jensen really doesn't know how to deal with how nice and good Jared is sometimes.

Thanks for the compliments. :)