Comments | ladyjanelly: Fic: Rollerball (J2, NC-17, 6/6)

ladyjanelly

Fic: Rollerball (J2, NC-17, 6/6)

Aug 22, 2007 22:37

Title:Rollerball
Author:Ladyjanelly
Movie Adapted: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0246894/
Genre: CW RPS
Characters/Pairings:Jared/Jensen
Rating:NC-17
Word Count: 10,202
Warnings: violence
Notes/Credits: Thanks to Jellicle for looking over this for me and giving me hand-holding and ( Read more... )

rollerball, j2, spn rps

Comments 84

jellicle August 23 2007, 03:57:01 UTC

YES!!!!!
She did it, baby!!!!!
*does a happy dance*

ladyjanelly August 23 2007, 15:51:19 UTC

Thank you so much. So, so much.

jellicle August 23 2007, 15:54:05 UTC

No thank you, darling. Thank you!

embroiderama August 23 2007, 04:30:14 UTC

Awesome! This story is a great ride, and this chapter ended it just right. Yay to both of them saving the day and ending up in Texas together!

ladyjanelly August 23 2007, 15:52:55 UTC

Yay!
I wanted to get away from the rescued/rescuer dynamic, so I'm glad that worked.

This is really my first action/adventure fic in a long long time.

Mmmm, texas. :)

editorzon August 23 2007, 04:32:22 UTC

*applauds wildly*

*cheers*

The end was amazing, you got nothing to worry about! I was on some serious pins and needles these last two sections and I'm so sad that the story is over because reading it has been so much fun! If you ever decided to do a little follow up and check in on the boys and their new life? I would be mighty happy.

All I can say is outstanding and if you were here I might have to give you a huge happy hug.

ladyjanelly August 23 2007, 15:54:57 UTC

Yay!

I was worried that I was too close to really tell if it sucked. So glad to hear it was exciting.

I might do a little more with these guys, some time in the future. Jensen might get tapped to handle the reformation of the sport or something.

Yay, hugs!

davidcrackin August 23 2007, 04:36:00 UTC

YOU DID IT!! This was so awesome! When I first saw it I was whiny because I want more artist!Jared, but after the first chapter I was hooked. You moved the story along quickly but it was tight and I totally believed it when Jared said that he loved Jensen. So Good!

ladyjanelly August 23 2007, 15:59:02 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. i was worried about that declaration of love, but it was either that or an ass-whoopin', and Jensen wasn't up to that. :)

The challenge did force me to condense the plot some, but not much, and I think the story is better for it. Less blahblahblah.

I got your reply to the drama post, and I keep meaning to get back to you on that. Just wanted you to know that no, you didn't make yourself unpopular with the observation. And--I'll try to reply better later.

I've got a model-verse chapter that I thought I'd posted but hadn't. Should be up before Monday.

ymmy12 August 23 2007, 06:00:50 UTC

AWESOME!!!!!!

ladyjanelly August 23 2007, 16:02:05 UTC

Thanks. :)