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[ladykillertofu]

“Will you be here when I wake up?”

Álvaro is dreading the answer; fearing the rejection (which seems to be the only constancy in their relationship).

Fernando merely looks at him (or maybe he doesn’t. Maybe he is looking at his own blurred reflection in the other Spaniard’s eyes). Then he smirks, teeth shining brightly in the strands of

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[diskarte]

MY GOD, WOMAN.

YOU. POST. ON LFCSLASH. LIKE. NOW.

[diskarte]

&, maybe it's better PG-13? not like it ever matters anyway. but teh noodeetee. &, naked is a fine title.

that, and you're amazing. i mean, i feel utterly horrible for not being able to give such great feedback, like you do for me, but GOD. everything is just written so beautifully. *squishes* ily. so, so much.

NAO POST.

[ladykillertofu]

I have no idea. Ratings confuse me something terrible. (and it's not like anyone cares about them anyway.)

Oh God. Believe me, your comment is more than enough to make me incredibly happy.
Thank you ♥ Does mean a lot to me.

OKAY I'M ON MY WAY BE PATIENT.

[diskarte]

nghh. it's really, really good. i'm memming it.

umm. you haven't posted your fic-i'm-proud-of fic yet, btw. :o

&, give me something abstract. like, love or time, or maybe or change. but those are over used. so... hello.

[ladykillertofu]

Thank you ♥
I tried to write a not-so-lovely Fernando, but I wasn't sure if I could make it. So, I'm happy it worked for you :)

[casi_casi]

Really wonderful, loved it.

Álvaro stares at the ceiling, observes the cobweb in a corner and a fly struggling to break free (but once you’re caught, it’s a futile fight, Álvaro knows, it won’t let you go, even if you wanted it to - which you don’t).
I'm a sucker for a good metaphor :)

[ladykillertofu]

Thanks :D

(and i so want to steal the Torres in your icon ;D)

[ladykillertofu]

Gah, you make me blush. Thanks :)

[jumping_down]

WHUT. I will officially offer to be your eternal cookie-giver from now on. There's no fic of yours that I won't like and this is just GUH.

I love the little golden sentences:

With his soft features and uncountable freckles hidden under the duvet of night, his face doesn’t seem like a picture of boyish heartiness anymore.

Instead, it’s a pale mask of mild indifference.

And it's all so coherent and amazing.

I'm always iffy with Fernando/Alvaro, but this was just executed so well. And somehow, I'm always irritated at people who make Fernando bad because I can't see it in my head, but you totally pulled this off and MY GOD WOMAN I LOVED IT. ♥

[ladykillertofu]

Oh God. Oh God. Oh God.

THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING YOU SAID. ♥♥

I don't even know why I wanted to write Fernando/Alvaro. It just.. happened. Sort of.
And I'm a little relieved you aren't irritated with me then :D But I'd like some more adorable!awkward!Dan-loving!Fernando (hint hint), y/y?