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ladylapislazuli

Cycle - Chapter 1

Jun 04, 2009 17:37

His feet dragged behind him as he walked, his head bowed and eyes focused on the pavement. The sun shone brightly on his pale skin, without ever truly touching him. Kakashi wasn’t sure why that was. But it tormented him. What he would have given to feel the heat of the sun on his face, or feel the breeze ruffling his hair. But there was nothing.
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fanfiction:naruto, kakairu

Comments 19

draggycakes June 4 2009, 08:42:07 UTC

yay ^^

I really like it so far, i can't wait to read more :D

And i feel so sad fo Kashi i wanna run up and hug him lol

ladylapislazuli June 4 2009, 10:52:47 UTC

Aw, thank you! :D

I wanna hug him whether he's sad or not. XD Kakashi hugs would be awesome! :D

leana106 June 4 2009, 11:19:50 UTC

You continued! Aw, I feel so bad for Kakashi, I just want to wrap him in a blanket and cuddle him until everything's better. I'm really interested to see why he's cursed. Can't wait for the next part.

ladylapislazuli June 6 2009, 11:00:16 UTC

Sorry about that. :P The angst just writes itself. XD

Thank you! :D

Gaatha anonymous June 4 2009, 11:33:54 UTC

Oh dear! poor kakashi.Gr8 fic.
it is really very interesting, promising & unique.
THANKYOU FOR SHARING.

Re: Gaatha ladylapislazuli June 6 2009, 11:00:47 UTC

Thank you very much! :D

alstarryn June 4 2009, 12:20:44 UTC

Ouch...killing himself numerous times and still living? Interesting but kinda creepy.

I'm mildly interested where Kakashi is this time, but it's not really important for the story.

Keep going please! I can't wait for Iruka to show up.
~Star

ladylapislazuli June 6 2009, 11:08:55 UTC

Mhm. It sucks to be Kakashi. :P But you'll see why it's happening later. :D

I'd thought about it, but not decided on a location myself. :P I've just based the setting around the small city I live in currently, combined with other cities I've been to. I imagine Kakashi is in another dimension, but he could be in this world too. I'll leave that open to interpretation... Sorry I can't give you a better answer. I don't know myself. :P

And thanks so much! :D

anonymous June 4 2009, 13:47:59 UTC

I happy to see this continued. You have put Kakashi in a very interesting predicament. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

melissa

ladylapislazuli June 6 2009, 11:09:23 UTC

Thanks you! :D