Snapshot of a Morning

[ladylioness]

Author's Notes: So renisanz was all 'Twin, I drew you something. Write for it.' and I was like 'But my room is currently in pieces and I'm SO STRESSED OUT,' and she sniffed and said, 'Fine, don't love me,' and I felt guilty and the art was SO LOVELY so I wrote something. Then I said, 'Okay, all I have to do is edit,' and then I read it again and 'editing

Comments

[renisanz]

My Dearest Brain!Twin,

How to I adequately put into words how amazing you are. Let me start by saying that you had me at the author's note. Seriously. You really have a gift for bringing scenes to life in the way you describe the actions and movements of the characters. I've told you this before, but it never ceases to please me. :)

I loved these lines:

A butterfly touch against his cheek made him open his eyes a crack to see Parker for a moment before she began tugging him out of the driver’s seat, his laptop bag slung over her shoulder. He had vague impressions of a hallway, an elevator, before Parker pushed into him a room.

The above section made me thing this story was going in a very different direction. Just sayin'.

He turned back and she smiled at him, that small, sweet, smile that said everything she didn't know how to put into words.

As there is a dearth of new Parker/Hardison fic right now, this is all the more wonderful to read. I appreciate you taking the time to write this.

*glomps*

-S.

P.S.: Also, this: If they

[evening_shadow]

I have to say, the thought of writing something naughty-ish never really occurred to me. Probably because I was inside your brain and I know you don't necessarily care for those type of stories. I did debate about whether she was wearing shorts or knee-high socks, but I decided you wouldn't have made her bottomless, so shorts it was! Also, the bowl was originally white and then I decided Parker would travel with her own cereal-eating equipment