Time can take its toll on the best of us. Look at you you're growing old so young.

Nov 03, 2010 23:40

So i think i have serious issues. This is rather depressing, but feel free to read it. It would kind make me warm and fuzzy if you told me what you thought. As well as spell check things.

note: any similarities to any persons, living or dead, is probably on purpose. unless i don't know you. oh. and this is about two girls, just to let you know.

she was my star )

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ringoluvapples November 4 2010, 23:20:25 UTC
BAWWWWWWWWWWW
WHY U WRITE SUCH SAD YET TOUCHINGLY BEAUTIFUL THINGS

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ladyluckx3 November 4 2010, 23:33:23 UTC
CAUSE I CAN?

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ringoluvapples November 4 2010, 23:34:02 UTC
...this is true

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ladyluckx3 November 4 2010, 23:37:50 UTC
>3

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kccreation November 7 2010, 21:38:58 UTC
When I read your disclaimer, I couldn't help but think of the opening of '500 Days of Summer', which, if you didn't know goes,
"The following is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental. Especially you Jenny Beckman. Bitch."
ahaha, I love that movie, and this story!

Anyway, I liked these a lot. I feel like any type lesbian literature that isn't of pornographic nature is highly lacking, so this was sort of... a breath of fresh air, you know?

It was also very sad. D:

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ladyluckx3 November 7 2010, 22:11:33 UTC
Rofl yes. I was think of thinking of that when i wrote the disclaimer xD

Ahh yeah I get what you mean. It seems like any kind of lesbian literature is just ... sex. Things that are sweet and loving are hard to come by.

Thanks <3

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amles80 November 8 2010, 21:11:07 UTC
Very sad, but beautiful. Well-written.

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ladyluckx3 November 8 2010, 22:16:19 UTC
Thank you <3

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xkosumosu November 9 2010, 05:44:27 UTC
I feel clever catching all the references ~.
Very nice. ♥

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ladyluckx3 November 9 2010, 23:16:03 UTC
Yes you're very clever <3
Thank you <3

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