Comments | ladymordecai: YJ fanfic, Bart/Tim, semi-fixit-fic

ladymordecai

YJ fanfic, Bart/Tim, semi-fixit-fic

Jan 24, 2009 04:57

LJ's a nice place to visit, but I suck at living here.

I'm working on the next bits for the House of El series and the sequel to "Saving Grace", but I was craving Bart/Tim and this happened. It's a weird style for me, so any critical feedback would be useful.

Title: The Fifth Sacred Thing
Fandom: DC comics
Pairing/Characters: Tim/Bart
Rating: PG-13
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character: bart allen, dc comics, character: tim drake, robin(s), fanfiction, pairing: bart/tim

Comments 12

jacklemmon January 24 2009, 14:30:48 UTC

That was just lovely. Lovely. So very comforting. I'm definitely adding this to my memories. Thank you.

ladymordecai January 25 2009, 07:25:55 UTC

You're very welcome. I am happy to have provided comfort.

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ladymordecai January 25 2009, 07:27:21 UTC

A lot of sad things have happened, and I really wanted to see them deal with their sadness by relying on each other.

Thank you.

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ladymordecai January 25 2009, 07:28:14 UTC

You're a silly creature, and it's all your fault anyway for making me read it.

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ladymordecai January 25 2009, 07:32:49 UTC

SO many things have happened to these characters. I have always liked the idea that Bart and Tim were sort of drawn to each other after he became Kid Flash, but that piece of canon is so small, and so focused on getting us to Crisis, that no one ever took the time to explore what was going on right then.

I'm glad to have pleased.

museofspeed January 25 2009, 06:06:56 UTC

Aww. So sweet! I love what good care Bart takes of Tim, and BART YELLING AT BRUCE! <3

I would have been very happy if this were the OYL Bart we were given.

ladymordecai January 25 2009, 07:39:03 UTC

Tim takes care of Bart first and later Bart takes care of him. Bruce really did need a smackdown for that. I know it happened for OOC reasons (Didio caving and bringing Steph back), but really, Bruce should know better.

I'm always so annoyed by the run Bart got as Flash, because he was completely out of character and then they killed him, and that's what they intended to do all along, and--grr. Waste of Bart's character.

Like I said: fixit-fic. Sort of. Either way, I'm pleased you liked it.

museofspeed January 25 2009, 07:51:34 UTC

Well, yes, but Tim caring for Bart wasn't as adorable.

And yeah, of course he should have. Shortpacked says it best, as always.

I haven't read FMA, I'll admit. Issue 13 came out after I'd finally read the first Teen Titans trade. I was all excited and really wanted to learn more about this awesome Bart character...and I was pointed to FMA 13. I haven't read any of it out of spite. If Bart comes back, I might read it. But not until then.

Well, it was definitely cute! Fixit-fics are fun.