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[ladyofmasbolle]

Some of a Very short, very basic poem that i began..

Bittersweet Nostalgia

Bittersweet nostalgia takes me hostage

Comments

[katemary77]

That was hot. Not overdone, I think, but not too blunt and technical either. You found a good balance. And the feeling you created with the words and matter of the poem really worked. I was feeling it :P:P

It is his eyes I see
An unwelcome, guilty bliss
I wish for a lack of colour here.

Is certainly my favourite. Gorgeous.

I wish I was poetic. But then I've never really tried to write poetry.

[ladyofmasbolle]

Thank You!

I think that was the easiest part to write, I really do.

I'm not poetic - i leave that to one of my really good friends.

I'm just here for everyone - Moral Support...

::smiles weakly::

[katemary77]

Well, for some one who isn't poetic, it was a lovely poem.

[ladyofmasbolle]

xD

Thank you very much! Yours was excellent, too.
I feel like making a community - "Unpoetic Poets"