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ladyofpride

Clandestine - chapter two

Mar 27, 2011 16:04

Title: Clandestine
Rating: Nc-17 (or M)
Pairings: Germany/Italy (Ludwig/Feliciano), HRE/Italy, and ~in a twisted sort of way~ Germany-is-HRE/Italy; additional pairings
Previous chapter(s): chapter one
Warnings: “angst” always deserves its own warning, because while this is a ‘romance’, I realize most of you would rather skip over the heartache. That ( Read more... )

dub-con, canada, prussia, romance, love, italy, language, violence, america, hetalia, germany, hre/italy, france, angst, austria, hetalia: axis powers, germany/italy, nc-17

Comments 6

mystofthestars March 27 2011, 23:01:31 UTC

Aaaah, this fanfiction seems gorgeous! I already love the first two chapters, and I'm only waiting to love more the next~
Although I can sense so much angst coming, but I trust you when you say this is romance ;) after all, heartache can be good to it sometimes - and to stories too!

Good luck for the next chapters.

(as for where Chibitalia and HRE would hang out, I always pictured them meeting in the North, maybe in the Alps next to Austria, but yeah. *unwanted comment is unwanted xD*)

ladyofpride March 27 2011, 23:34:27 UTC

Aw, thank you! And yeah, I always enjoy a healthy dose of heartache with my romances. Makes the heart grow fonder, you know?

(Oooh---the Alps! Maybe I should change that up. I had a friend who visited Tuscany last year and the photos were just so gorgeous, I simply had to slip it in there though. Will brush up on my research though---probably should've put them farther north to begin with, so that's the second change I've got to add to my list).

And again, thank you, darling! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. ;)

hyperactivator March 29 2011, 00:46:12 UTC

Awesome.

ladyofpride March 29 2011, 02:47:03 UTC

*Bows* Why thank you, darling. ;)

nolee375 April 19 2011, 17:30:29 UTC

It's beautiful... Feli is too sweet... I'm really hoping the next chapter

ladyofpride April 20 2011, 02:23:17 UTC

XD Aw, thank you! Actually, the next chapter is almost complete, but I've hung back on posting it because ff.net has stumbled across a glitch that's frozen my editing powers over half my stories (including, unfortunately, 'Clandestine'). All they've told me is that I'm not being punished for any violations. Lol...

Since the chapters are longer for Clandestine (and since I go into greater depth with the character profiles), the storye probably won't see an update until after I've completed my finals (which will be at the end of this month). :( My apologies.

In any case, thank you for your wonderful review! I'm glad you like it. ;)