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ladyoracle

Apr 21, 2009 15:03

Goddess in Retirement ( Read more... )

Comments 5

insomniatrix April 21 2009, 07:36:50 UTC

I really like this. And the title is wonderful.

insomniatrix April 21 2009, 11:15:00 UTC

I wonder about the last line...

ladyoracle April 22 2009, 08:31:59 UTC

Hmm. I was unsure about it, too. It turns the whole poem around, but maybe it's not necessary.

the_karen_show April 21 2009, 13:11:01 UTC

this made me sad :(

lala2 April 22 2009, 10:12:14 UTC

This is so sad...but as always I am amazed at the way you can paint such a vivid picture with words.