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[ladyoracle]

"Tent Revival

Comments

[sandokai]

The whole sunflower seed metaphor thing really works.

The second one makes me sad for the girls at the camp (though that could also be because I went to camp too when I was a kid...)

[yukimi]

How long are you going to be staying in another country?

[ladyoracle]

The contract goes through January, 2011, and after that we might return to the States or go some other place still abroad. It depends on what the job market is like and what we want for our lives by then.

[banana_queenie]

This is beautiful. It came at a perfect time for Vikki too I'm sure. Your entries showed up one following the other on my page.

[twinkejinx]

I really like "Tent Revival." Thanks for sharing!

[ladyoracle]

That is an interesting suggestion because I did that in an earlier draft, but then I cut out two stanzas because I felt like it was too much repetition. I'll go back and look at it again, though. Thanks!