Comments | ladyriona: FIC: With Our Names On It

ladyriona

FIC: With Our Names On It

Jul 30, 2013 11:48

Fic! Impromptly written for the "Plus One Ficathon" .

Title: With Our names On It
Author: LadyRiona
Rating: M, definitely
Summary: AU. It's the Roaring '20s. John Smith is at a local dive, enjoying the night, when he sees her, all legs and red, red lips.

Also, Happy birthday to spooky_knight!

( FIC Under the Cut )

smut, adult, fic, doctor/rose, ten/rose

Comments 8

fogsblue July 30 2013, 17:27:39 UTC

I know I told you already, but I frakking LOVE this, it's brilliant! :)

develish1 July 31 2013, 03:47:05 UTC

erm.....yes, nicely done love.

now if you'll excuse me, I think I have a.....thing.......to go do, lol

(and I just realised I hadn't added you to my f-list, which is unforgivable and I shall correct that immediately)

Have I told you lately? spooky_knight July 31 2013, 05:45:06 UTC

That I love you? Man, that was cool. 20's era, strangers in the night, doctor/rose au... everything good in the world. Thank you Ri!! So so much. I love it. Fic is the best present ever! :D *squee*

julesndairyland August 1 2013, 02:56:27 UTC

Great!

jer832 August 13 2013, 00:30:32 UTC

A gentleman should show a lady a good time, but a man showed a woman an even greater one. May I borrow that line without crediting you immediately? : D

Brilliant narrative style from the start. This is wonderful. I have got to come back and read it again.

ladyriona August 13 2013, 00:43:42 UTC

Then why even ask if you're not going to credit me?

Thanks for the read.

jer832 August 13 2013, 00:51:32 UTC

It just seemed like something perfect to say in bed as he decides to roll over and go to sleep. Citing the author would come over coffee, later. What do you think?

This is a hard style to maintain; you make it seem natural as breathing. When I read the first paragraph, I heard it in William Holden's voice, then Bogey's, then Harrison Ford's. This is one of my favourite styles. I don't know if gritty and/or noire are done much anymore.... Dr. Who! Who'd have thunk? You and mcinstry have made me very happy.

jer832 August 14 2013, 14:54:16 UTC

I just want to make sure you know I would never cop another writer's words. I only meant if the situation came up in rl, to say to my partner to get to the next round faster. Or I could just start with, 'as ladyriona says...'

At any rate, this is a cool style, and now it makes me think of a jazz dance I saw the other night... same period, same sassiness. She was wearing a red silk dress and red heels.