Comments | ladysonsie: Fic: Flash Burn

ladysonsie

Fic: Flash Burn

Jul 17, 2011 12:56

Title: Flash Burn
Pairing: Van/Jake
Rating: PG
Word Count: 700
Warnings: baby!angst, RPS
Disclaimer: Everything you are about to read is not real. Fiction, kids. Which means I'm just one big liar. So no offense meant and ohmygod don't sue, plz! I kinda like my things and want to keep them, thanks.
Summary: Jake gets sunburned but ends up with a ( Read more... )

rps, fanfic, van/jake, writing

Comments 33

frances_veritas July 18 2011, 01:59:16 UTC

no really. this was so gorgeous and heartfelt. and i love love love how much you can say without dialogue. I SUCK AT THAT. and i admire people who can write awesome description and imagery. this was just so very lovely.

AND I SO WANT TO KNOW WHAT THEIR FIGHT WAS ABOUT. Curious minds are curious. :P

ladysonsie July 20 2011, 07:23:24 UTC

Thanks, bb! And ha, I'm the opposite! I soooo admire people that can do dialogue. That stuff still is hard for me to write so love and respect to you all out there that nail that all the time.

AND I SO WANT TO KNOW WHAT THEIR FIGHT WAS ABOUT. Curious minds are curious. :P

Heeeee. I KNOW. :P But I'm gonna save that for now in case I write more of this after BB!

:D

newhaven183 July 18 2011, 02:15:46 UTC

excellent and so timely.

thanks,
s

ladysonsie July 20 2011, 07:23:37 UTC

Thank you!

sweetiejelly July 18 2011, 02:34:19 UTC

And being Van started to fill the moment with rambling to move past all the unanswered energy that hangs whenever they are in the same room, let alone whenever they let their skin touch.
...

Only this time he knows it’s not his sunburn that is warming his outside, or his insides.
Gorgeous.The whole thing felt like waiting to exhale. It's beautiful. ♥

ladysonsie July 20 2011, 07:26:08 UTC

Oh! What a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much, Ronnie. Gah, you're too sweet. ♥

brighton_girl July 18 2011, 03:28:23 UTC

I love this...because of course they would have a stupid fight and not talk for awhile and then of course they would just be right back to themselves. Lovely.

ladysonsie July 20 2011, 07:28:42 UTC

I love that we know that about them, that they have such an ease with their relationship that no matter what happens put them in the same room and they turn back into being them.

Thank you so much for reading! So happy you liked it.

iceskaterrn July 18 2011, 04:02:17 UTC

MUST HAVE SEQUEL!!!! Please?

ladysonsie July 20 2011, 07:29:41 UTC

Aw, maybe! I kinda enjoyed this little playground but have to finish Big Bang first! But thanks so much!