Fic: What the Water Gave Me

[ladysonsie]

Title: What the Water Gave Me
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Rating: PG
Word Count: 470
Warnings: None really.
Summary: It's raining, it's pouring.
Notes: 'Tis a very special day because sarafim is celebrating her birthday! And because I love her a ridiculous amount I wanted to just scribble a little something down. And this is what came. Sara loves storms and boys

Comments

[secondmezzanine]

Sigh, sigh, sigh.

This is just... utterly beautiful.

Especially the last line. And the first line. And every line in between. But especially the last line.

Like poetry.

[ladysonsie]

And seeing you comment means I get blushy. Gosh, thanks so much, Mezz. I'm so happy you liked it and the last line resonated. That means a lot. Thank you!

♥

[samson79]

poetry ♥

[ladysonsie]

Thank you! ♥

[newhaven183]

different... and i like it.

[ladysonsie]

So happy you liked it, thank you so much!

[kelly_ken]

Aww, I love the atmosphere in this story. I love storms too and reading this just makes me feel all cozy and warm. So beautifully written.

Thanks for sharing! ♥

[ladysonsie]

I love storms as well. And we don't get them here nearly enough! It was pouring outside this weekend which totally put me in this mood.

Thank you so much for the sweet comment! As always you are a doll. ♥

[random_nic]

I love the way that you used the rain to tell the story of them. Exquisite.

[ladysonsie]

Thank you! So glad you liked it and it all worked!

♥