fic: the people we used to be (part two)

Sep 17, 2012 19:44

Title: the people we used to be
Author: ladysonsie
Artist: sweetiejelly
Rating: Soft NC-17
Disclaimer: These characters? Not mine. Just borrowing to play in the sandbox with. I like to get 'em dirty, okay?
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Noah
Word Count: 12.2k
Warnings: Strong language. Mini!angst. Sexual content.
Spoilers: None. Show's over, kids!
Summary: Two AU style ( Read more... )

bigbang posting, luke/noah, fanfic, atwt

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ladysonsie September 28 2012, 07:41:15 UTC
Thank you m'dear! It was fun to write them in a totally different 'verse. I usually stay away from AUs but this time thought it would nice to write something a little different.

On a side note, I miss your writing and hope that maybe we'll see some more in the coming months.

Well, first thank you for that. And actually this kinda got my brain going again with these boys so I hope so as well! Already have some things kicking around so we shall see, hee.

Thank you so much again! <333

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crownroyal_51 September 23 2012, 01:50:45 UTC
I loved each of these vignettes. You left me wanting to know more of each story! What happened when New York Luke took Noah back to his fancy apartment to meet him mom? Why was Luke selling his body in LA and how did making movies lose its luster for Noah? And how did that reunion dinner between the boys go?

Great job!

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ladysonsie September 28 2012, 07:45:14 UTC
Okay, so these are fabulous questions. Seriously. You now have me curious actually! Like I said to someone else I am so not a verbose writer and getting this amount is always a huge stretch, ha.

But you never know, maybe I can play in this 'verse again because I loved what you brought up, hee!

And thank you!

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asonearth September 25 2012, 08:00:05 UTC
wow, two/three different stories, weaved together in a way, i'm speechless.. you have such a colorful way with words it's a pleasure to read this and get lost of your own creations of universes.. so different and still Luke and Noah...i liked how you ended this, coming full circle to your first part and the beginning. i'm still impressed how i think now a phone call can make a difference !! thank you so much for sharing your talented writing <3 Annette

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ladysonsie September 28 2012, 07:49:49 UTC
Aw, Annette. No thank you. Your comments are so lovely and were such a pleasure to read. So glad that even though it's a different Luke and Noah they still came across as them. That is prob. the best compliment to hear.

And I def. think phone calls can make a difference. Powerful things they are at times!

But thank you thank you again. Happy you enjoyed it and thank you for your sweet comment.

♥!

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wheelie47 September 26 2012, 20:26:53 UTC
So glad that the Noah in this second part was able to find this Luke, instinctively knowing that this guy was different from all the other pick ups. You can really feel his desperate search to actually feel something... to fill the aching void.

Stunning! What a unique and wonderfully told story, masterfully linked together by the thread of Luke's phone calls to Noah. So glad Noah got back in time!

That feeling of home.

The people they might have been are different now.

But they will always be them when they are together.

And that feels a lot like a promise. - just adore these lines.

Thanks so much for sharing.

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ladysonsie September 28 2012, 07:53:36 UTC
I think what is so fun to write with these boys is that they always come together and see who each other are no matter what 'verse you have them in.

They are just meant to be and I love that so much.

And thank you for this! So glad those lines worked and linking the stories with the call as well.

Happy you liked it!

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pirl November 12 2012, 17:05:38 UTC
(Sloooooowly making my way thru a lot of BB posts...)

Oh wow. This is amazing. I love stories that weave around time, especially stories that deal with potential fates/destinies/etc. The one with homeless Noah is my favorite. So much emotion and the details were amazing. Noah picking up Luke was definitely hot, but so sad too. I'm such a sucker for broken versions of Noah. :D

Fantastic job! This was such a treat to read.

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ladysonsie November 21 2012, 06:34:44 UTC
Gosh I need to get back to that. Thank you for reminding me that I still have comments to do!

And thank you thank you for your words. Gosh what a lovely comment and I'm so so happy this all worked together and you liked it. And broken!Noah is a personal fave of mine as well so I totally get you. Love reading those versions.

*pets him*

But seriously thank you again. Means a lot.

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