Merlin Fic: What Matters Most

[ladytory]

Wow, look at that, I actually wrote a fic!

Title: What Matters Most
Author: ladytory
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Word Count: ~1600
Rating: PG-13 (if that)
Warnings: Minor character death
A/N: Thanks to onlymefeelinsad and ladytonks for braving this fic to do my beta work.
Disclaimer: Not mine, more's the pity.

Summary: If that were in fact the case...He would have been sitting on

Comments

[forest_rose]

Beautifully written! The last lines are perfection. Merlin's grief is heartbreaking, and I love the way you've written it with such intensity whilst still keeping your descriptions subtle. Wonderful fic, thank you.

I think you have a typo in there - it's 'Ealdor', not 'Elador'.

[ladytory]

Thanks for the lovely review, and thanks for the typo catch!

[angelqueen04]

This is beautiful! Love how something new comes from the sorrow of losing Hunith! *hugs them*

Great job! :)

[ladytory]

Thank you!

[zephre]

lovely!

[ladytory]

Thanks!

[elirwen]

I like the revelation!fics so much.

It was beautifully written and you nicely captured the emotions.

Well done. :)

[ladytory]

Thanks. I am glad that you enjoyed it!

[hecate_666]

wow! fantastic! really heart-breakingly beautiful! I really like the POVs exchange in the story! well written too! Thanks for posting! :)

[ladytory]

Thanks for reviewing! I am glad that you liked it :)