okay i have finally calmed down, and yes it did involve valium and it did indeed take me an entire day BUT I HAVE FULLY RECOVERED AND I AM HERE TO LEAVE A (HOPEFULLY SOMEWHAT)DECENT COMMENT.
okay so where do i even start.
#1. andrew's POV. i said it before and i'll say it again: I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING ANDREW'S POV. seriously. it's underrated and sort of rare and you do it so well i just want to love you forever and send you a customized pie in the shape of a heart in the mail. yeah. AND ALSO FIRST-PERSON PERSPECTIVE WHICH IS DAMN HARD TO WRITE IN MY OPINION AND YET YOU GOT IT SPOT ON AND MANAGE TO KEEP IT IN CHARACTER AND SADHKSAHJFKDSFGS I LOVE YOU LONG TIME
Dayaaammm. That was hot. I like the switch of control with Jesse. And how Andrew had to take a second to comprehend it. Seriously. Unf. Hng. Hot. Hawt.
:3 Thank you!! It was my first smut-like thing I've ever written with that much detail put into it. I was afraid of making Jesse too controlling since he's not necessarily a dominant figure, but I'm glad you liked it.
1 = "Obviously I was the more emotional portion in our warped equation," WARPED EQUATION MY FOOT! YOU GUYS ARE THE FREAKIN' THEORY OF RELATIVITY!
2 = However, if the chicks were changed to cats, that would have been a different story entirely. I agree with this statement. I would gladly be a cat for a number of different reasons but especially) if Jesse were to 'pick me up'.
3 = Opening the door for Andrew like a a true gentleman!
4 = OO Jesse PULLS EMERGENCY STOP (ILLEGAL) and admits to leaving BECAUSE of Andrew, I like where this is going...
5 = “We’re going to alert the authorities and be arrested under proclaiming a false emergency,” he swiftly reminded me, though his voice slipped into the fast-paced method he picked up to mirror Mark’s linguistic patterns.
6 = “You’re the one who pressed it!”
“Yes, but I now regret the action.”LMBFAO. XD He is just like me in this respect. :P
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I just want to say thank you, though those words will never be enough, because you just seriously made my morning amazing. Your comment, I just started crying from happiness and my hands were smushed up against my face because I didn't know what to do with them. I am so... so glad you liked it. You don't know how much that just put me into a good mood xD Thank you.
Wow, I found this mostly by chance because I am a big fan of audiofic, and you are really talented as a reader. Your expressiveness, your character voices, the sound of your voice in general, are all awesome. I hope you make more audiofic-there is so much great TSN fic and only one other person recording audiofic of it. When you finish this, or when you make something else, I think you should consider posting it to amplificathon.
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okay so where do i even start.
#1. andrew's POV. i said it before and i'll say it again: I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING ANDREW'S POV. seriously. it's underrated and sort of rare and you do it so well i just want to love you forever and send you a customized pie in the shape of a heart in the mail. yeah. AND ALSO FIRST-PERSON PERSPECTIVE WHICH IS DAMN HARD TO WRITE IN MY OPINION AND YET YOU GOT IT SPOT ON AND MANAGE TO KEEP IT IN CHARACTER AND SADHKSAHJFKDSFGS I LOVE YOU LONG TIME
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I hope you continue this!
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&I shall be writing another part, though I'm not sure when.
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2 = However, if the chicks were changed to cats, that would have been a different story entirely. I agree with this statement. I would gladly be a cat for a number of different reasons but especially) if Jesse were to 'pick me up'.
3 = Opening the door for Andrew like a a true gentleman!
4 = OO Jesse PULLS EMERGENCY STOP (ILLEGAL) and admits to leaving BECAUSE of Andrew, I like where this is going...
5 = “We’re going to alert the authorities and be arrested under proclaiming a false emergency,” he swiftly reminded me, though his voice slipped into the fast-paced method he picked up to mirror Mark’s linguistic patterns.
6 = “You’re the one who pressed it!”
“Yes, but I now regret the action.”LMBFAO. XD He is just like me in this respect. :P ( ... )
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I just want to say thank you, though those words will never be enough, because you just seriously made my morning amazing. Your comment, I just started crying from happiness and my hands were smushed up against my face because I didn't know what to do with them. I am so... so glad you liked it. You don't know how much that just put me into a good mood xD Thank you.
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