"Castiel was sitting Indian-style in the chair beside Dean’s bed, elbows on his knees, fingers steepled under his chin. He was staring at Dean intently, and apparently did not see any reason to stop doing so now that Dean was actually awake." LOL YOUR CASTIEL IS AWESOME! Everytime he opened his mouth I was laughing. He is so cute :)
I just had to stop here and say how SPOT ON your characterization of Dean, Sam and Cas are. Jo too! Highschool A/U's are usually hard for me to finish because the characterization is too warped for my tastes, but you got self deprecating Dean down to a T. Cas is still that intriguing, unusual and awkward person that we love. Sam is still that stubborn idealistic person who idolizes Dean. Gah! Just wonderful stuff here!
Oh and I have to specifically say thank you SO MUCH for not making Cas the wimpy kid. I like that at first appearances he might seem that way but you've shown he's quite capable to defending himself. It's like some writers forget how much of a BAMF Cas is and just focus on the awkward. You seem to have found a very nice mix of both, which is so refreshing to see in fanfic. :)
Thank you so much! I really wanted to keep the characters as recognisable as possible, so I'm glad you think I did a good job.
And yeah, it kind of bugs me when people forget what a badass Cas is. I mean, he's a warrior angel who battled his way through Hell to rescue Dean! I love his awkwardness, and I figured he'd be a target for bullies in a high school setting, but I also figured he'd be able to take care of himself! BAMF Cas FTW :D
Oh my God. It is embarrassing how much I've cried so far and Dean and Cas are barely even friends yet. I've definitely felt the same way as Dean a couple of times and reading about it made all those emotions flood back. I just wanna give Dean a big hug and tell him it'll be okay and that he'll fall in love with Cas and everything will be rainbows and sunshine, he just has to wait ;-; I usually don't have the stomach for angsty situations cause I'm an emotional wreck, but this fic is just wonderful and I couldn't stop myself from reading it even if I wanted to! Also, your characterisation is just perfect and your writing is amazing! I love everything about this so far and I can't wait to read more! :) <3
Thank you so much! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply - I've been awful about responding to comments lately. I'm really glad you liked it though. I've definitely felt the same as Dean before - writing this was actually quite cathartic.
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Could you fix the ends of your stories pleaseee!
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LOL YOUR CASTIEL IS AWESOME!
Everytime he opened his mouth I was laughing. He is so cute :)
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Oh and I have to specifically say thank you SO MUCH for not making Cas the wimpy kid. I like that at first appearances he might seem that way but you've shown he's quite capable to defending himself. It's like some writers forget how much of a BAMF Cas is and just focus on the awkward. You seem to have found a very nice mix of both, which is so refreshing to see in fanfic. :)
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And yeah, it kind of bugs me when people forget what a badass Cas is. I mean, he's a warrior angel who battled his way through Hell to rescue Dean! I love his awkwardness, and I figured he'd be a target for bullies in a high school setting, but I also figured he'd be able to take care of himself! BAMF Cas FTW :D
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I usually don't have the stomach for angsty situations cause I'm an emotional wreck, but this fic is just wonderful and I couldn't stop myself from reading it even if I wanted to!
Also, your characterisation is just perfect and your writing is amazing! I love everything about this so far and I can't wait to read more! :) <3
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