Bittersweet [13/?]

May 06, 2009 20:27

Title : Bittersweet
Pairing : Uchipi - Ryotego
Summary : Tegoshi Yuya, a wealthy boy who always gets what he wants, suddenly decides to have a part time job just for fun
A/N : fast update? is it? ahahahaha, anyway it's the lucky 13 ^^
WARNING: new characters children ^^


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uchipi, ryotego, fanfic

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haizul May 6 2009, 16:56:15 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! >__________< YOU UPDATEEED!!!! XDDDD ♥ OMG UCHI SLAPPED PI!! 8O!! gah.. but i totally understand why he did that.. Yamapi was too much DD; hope they'll sort things out soon!! >.<~ ♥

heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee THE RYOTEGO WAS SO SO SWEEEEEEEEEEEEET. ♥ cuddly RyoTego FTWWWW!!! XDD ah~~ i miss ryotego >__< thanks for writing them ^_____^ *huggles you*

ganbatte Pam-chan!! *hugs hugs* ♥

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laftkeichan May 9 2009, 10:18:40 UTC
hi~
yeaa uchi slapped pi, uchi was really sad...
ahahha yess ryotego is cute.. i really want to write them at that time^^
ehehehe~
thankyou for reading it ne....
*hugs hugs*

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yuyako16 May 6 2009, 17:26:46 UTC
gawd~!! utterly cute~!! that ryotego moment is so utterly cute~!!
i love it~!!
but i'm actually sad for uchi and pi. they should be together. aww~!!
i hope they fix everything soon.

update soon ^^

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laftkeichan May 9 2009, 10:24:32 UTC
hi~
ahahah yes ryotego ne~
right now uchi is sad... and pi still acts difficult~
hehehhe..
thankyou for reading it^^

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zxcvbnm109 May 6 2009, 19:30:20 UTC
OMG...that was such an angsty/sad chapter and I <3 angsty stuff...no words to describe it...by far, this is my fav. chapter....xD...
the ryopi fight, the uchi-begging them to stop thing...so beautiful...

and poor Uchi and Pi T__T, I don't really take pity of Ryo, cuz he just got hurt a little and tego made it all better 4 him, but those two, they have no one to comfort them...and I sorta don't like Tego (who am I kidding?...I <3 him...lol...) in these past chapter cuz everyone's going through a tough time, while he's like being a brat....lol...xD

please, please, I beg of you, update As Soon As Possible :)

p.s.- lol...you used my word, morning call...lol...xD

p.p.s- I don't like Tego's hair now, it looks so ugh......T___T

p.p.p.s- so did Uchipi end after this chapter? :(

p.p.p.p.s- ok, I'll stop p.s.-ing now...xD

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laftkeichan May 9 2009, 10:27:55 UTC
hello~
i guess that was a bit angsty ehehehe~
yess there's fight between ryopi and uchipi.... oh, pi...
uchi and pi is going through a hard time now~

*ehehehe it's morning call ne.... :)
**tego got a perm right??
***uchipi ends....? i still have no idea, but i'll try to write as soon as i got the mood^____^ *currently working on chapter 14

ehehehehhe thankyou for reading it^^

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lilazngrl11794 May 6 2009, 21:22:07 UTC
omg the ryotego was so so so so so so soooooooo cute ♥
but the uchipi... T_T
can't wait for update!

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laftkeichan May 9 2009, 10:31:01 UTC
ehehhe yes ryotego part^^
uchipi is having problems now~
hehehe thankyou for reading it^^

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ryorin May 7 2009, 00:34:40 UTC
pam nee
i knol u'll update when i see post the previous chap on wasurenaisa and jent_fanfics
hehhe

so LOVEEE RYOTEGOOOO Moment :DDD
bedroom scene hihhi
u makes me doki doki
i wonder if tego likes ryo . .
u make me curious pam nee ^^

feel so sad for uchi
yamap and uchi should be together
not fighting like that

well
update soon nee
pam nee . .

HUGGGSSS
ganbatte na

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laftkeichan May 9 2009, 10:34:24 UTC
waaa you figured my way of posting^^
ehehehehe....

ryo cared a lot about tegoshi ne~
ehehe doki doki~
uchipi is having trouble.. uchi was really sad~
hehe okaiii^^
thankyou for reading it.. *HUGS HUGS*

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