Lonely Ladies chapter 2

[lagos61]

Miranda waited patiently in the closet until she was sure that Andrea had left the building. It wouldn't do for the girl to know that she'd been discovered in the midst of her treachery. The extra time allowed Miranda to focus instead on the more important issue of how she would handle the Daniel Brown plagiarism case: She went through the rest

Comments

[kali_blue]

Absolutely delightful! Wonderful descriptions of Miranda's thought process.

Poor Miranda, she has to hide in a closet to find the evidence to prove her genius while listening to Andy go on about her. When she plans to reveal her genius with Nigel it is overshadowed by thoughts of Andy. When she brings her into her lair to go on the offensive she becomes red thinking over Andrea's "vulgar" descriptions. Then speechless when Andy surprises her by getting cerulean blue and subtly complimenting her eyes and not her chest that she dallied through 7 outfits to decide to finally showcase. I love, love, loved it. More soon.

yr. comments

[lagos61]

Thank you. I want to reverse things a bit in the next chapter--a bit more on Andy's thoughts when she thinks Miranda might be looking at her! Revenge!

[mayireadtoday]

From first to last really well-written.

I liked Miranda with the twins and her thoughts on motherhood.

I liked Miranda smacking Nigel around.

I really liked Andy's sudden revelation: "Your eyes. They're cerulean, like you said. Your suit is indigo, your blouse is lapis, and together they make your eyes reflect cerulean. They all complement one another. That's what you were trying to explain about colors."

In this fic, aas Andy had her make-over yet?

yr. comment

[lagos61]

Thank you. No, no make-over yet. In this fic. I wanted to make sure that Miranda doesn't really care about the six 6 or the clothes--not that the makeover won't make it harder not to stare!

[tanama30]

great update and i loved the in the end when andy explains that she gets what miranda was talking about. i can't wait for more update soon

yr. comment

[lagos61]

Thank you. My beta, xenavirgin, really helped me with that line. She's a goddess.

[wiser_dachshund]

Omg. You are a freakin' genius. There are too many amazing lines in this to highlight just one, but I have to say, the image of Miranda looking at her own cleavage just about killed me- and the following comment about being hit with the broadside of a shovel was also hysterical.

MORE! MORE of this hilarity!

your comment

[lagos61]

Thank you soooo much. I've very much enjoyed your fictions and your images:"that's all folks" = love at first sight!
Your willingness to be vulnerable with your work on this site is one of the reasons why I finally decided to take the plunge with fiction. Thank you, for all of your fics and images! I can't explain what a thrill it is to be commented on by authors I've read and respected (both praise and correction), but IT ROCKS!!!

[jintymac]

This was an awesome chapter, I really love how you're linking the main story with your own plot ideas and how the characters are reacting etc...

I can't wait to see what Miranda has planned for Andy's behaviour but she was certainly surprised by Andy at the end of this chapter lol!

your comment

[lagos61]

Thank you! The next chapter will be more Andy-centric.