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lagos61

The Lonely Ladies: Chapter 5

Mar 12, 2010 23:06

The Lonely Ladies: Chapter 5

When the alarm rang at five a.m. the next morning, Miranda slept through it; luckily, for once, Stephen was lying next to her and actually shook her awake with a grumpy comment about dawn’s crack. Even after she opened her eyes, it took Miranda a few moments to realize where she was and what day it was, as she had been ( Read more... )

dwp, au, mirandy, femslash

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only_breathe March 13 2010, 09:12:24 UTC

Oh Yey .. me too,me too - let me go too !!

Really into this lol :P

lagos61 March 15 2010, 01:54:16 UTC

Does this mean you'll be back too--after all, Andy Doesn't leave!

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lagos61 March 15 2010, 01:56:29 UTC

Thank you. I always thought the movie scene was awkward, and now I've manipulated a version of what's "really" happening.

pure_ecstasy6 March 13 2010, 10:59:29 UTC

I very much like this.. loved how this was all Miranda base.. you write both characters brilliantly! Hmm, I look forward to seeing what shall happen when Miranda gets back and finds that Andy didnt infact quit lol! Will she call her again as Miriam, I wonder?! :p I could actually see her doing that whilst she was bored one night at the country house lol! Anyways thanks for writing this =D

lagos61 March 15 2010, 01:57:27 UTC

Thank you--oh giver of prompts. Not bored, but Miranda does have a real reason to call back after the next 2 chapters.

la_fono March 13 2010, 14:41:42 UTC

I'm really liking this - we tend to see this sequence of events from Andy's side, and it's really interesting to see just what Miranda might have had to deal with. It's also nice to see Miranda truly complicated, juggling her inner demons with everything else.
Looking forward to seeing how this develops. Nice one. :)

lagos61 March 15 2010, 01:58:39 UTC

Thank you. I haven't worked everything out in my head, but I did always wonder about the twins' recital.

raventat March 13 2010, 14:54:52 UTC

You did really well with this chapter especially in capturing how much Miranda internalizes her experiences and how much she is motivated by her children. I thought this was going to be a soft and fluffy story and while I would have loved that too I do hope you will continue in this way of indepth character analysis and development.

lagos61 March 15 2010, 02:01:34 UTC

Thank you. It's my first fic. so I'm not sure I'll be able to stay coherent, but I'll try. :)