in some hours Rachel wakes up and heads to spain, i don't see her til around the 26th, assuming things like me being alive at that time, in the country local area etc
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You wanted feedback so here it is, I guess. It's not bad, at least you can use proper grammer and puctuation(unlike me). Also, I believe that Celestia Star is just on vacation.
now that Rachel is gone, it's time to crash out, hit the drink and paint some of those goddammed models!
Who knows, maybe you could get a job?
Or just occupy your time writting stuff for the Eternal matrix....
well i don't bother with capital letters, or for that matter much spelling or punctuation and overuse ... and something ( ) but i find what i type strangely readable as opposed to the completely illegible hand written stuff.
adam i don't drink! not for a long time now, am gonna paint though :) and think about Rachel all the time, have discovered the dialling code for spain but can't get through... txt mesg works though i think.
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Who knows, maybe you could get a job?
Or just occupy your time writting stuff for the Eternal matrix....
laterz
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adam i don't drink! not for a long time now, am gonna paint though :) and think about Rachel all the time, have discovered the dialling code for spain but can't get through... txt mesg works though i think.
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Well, now is the time to start! :D
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thanks for reading poetry, i am not working on any right now, just when erin forces me to write stuff :)
i'm just not the drinking type adam, i'm almost... viceless
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