Under Cover

Sep 25, 2011 13:48

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larsfarm77 September 25 2011, 22:41:43 UTC
Ooooh, love the switcheroo ... I was sure it was Laura, but I had no idea who she was talking to. Great stuff!

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lakeside_cabin September 26 2011, 12:03:12 UTC
Thank you. I have never written anything like this before. For the last decade my writing consisted mainly of training documents and reports for work. My muse blindsided me with this, I didn't even know she existed.

Good health and good hunting!

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bugsfic September 26 2011, 01:59:59 UTC
I just love switcharoo fics! Unless of course, it reveals some unholy sexy times, but you thankfully passed on that.

Boomer is a perfect person for this fic. She knows Bill but has to keep being evil; she's just drawn that way.

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lakeside_cabin September 26 2011, 12:09:28 UTC
Thank You. I am not ready to write any sort of sexy times. Unless maybe it's implied with humour. We shall see.
I was really stuck on the idea that one of the cylons would know about the relationship between Laura and Bill. Boomer seemed the obvious choice for the switcharoo.

Good health and good hunting!

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somadanne September 26 2011, 02:13:59 UTC
I really enjoyed the complexity of this and how my assumptions got turned on their head!

And oh, Boomer, poor Boomer.

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lakeside_cabin September 26 2011, 12:15:41 UTC
Thank You. I wasn't sure if this was going to translate well from my strange little brain.

Good health and good hunting!

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lacklusterfic September 26 2011, 02:58:34 UTC
Ah, this is very clever! :-D Doral was a good choice for the second member of the search party; any of the others would have seen through that bit of subterfuge immediately. ;-)

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lakeside_cabin September 26 2011, 12:24:09 UTC
Thank You. The Fives always struck me as the most naive cylon model.

Good health and good hunting!

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redrockcan September 26 2011, 03:55:26 UTC
Nicely done!! I had no idea it was Boomer and Doral. I also loved the "cheesy mystery novel" line. Heh!! I look forward to more excellent fics!! No pressure!! :)

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lakeside_cabin September 26 2011, 12:37:01 UTC
Thank You.
I also loved the "cheesy mystery novel" line. I didn't want to detract from the mood by using a title I associate with well known canon moments.

I look forward to more excellent fics!! No pressure!! :) I still can't believe I wrote this one! I want to write more, maybe the next challenge will inspire me.

Good health and good hunting!

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