Faking Family: Part 2

[lakukuli]

TITLE: FAKING FAMILY
PAIRING: MATSUMIYA, BROKEN SAKUMIYA
GENRE: SLIGHT ANGST, ROMANCE
DISCLAIMER: WISH I OWN THEM, BUT I DON´T :(
SUMMARY: WHEN ONE LOVE IS PUNISHED, ANOTHER ONE CAN BE YOUR SALVATION

Part 1

Comments

[br_arashi]

IT WAS TOTALLY INCREDIBLE!
Iloved the way Jun slowly carved his way through Nino's heart, in a so strong way his love couldn't be ignored.
I guess, in a way, Nino also loved him very much... I'm really happy for his happy ending!
Both of them!

Please, right more Matsumiyas! You're way of seeing them is really lovely!
Thanks for the hard work!

[lakukuli]

Happy you love it that much :D
Yeah, under that cool appearance Jun is such a sweet pie, and Nino does love him very much, he just needed time
I was suppose to write a Sakumiya but I'm in the Matsumiya mood, so we'll see...
btw I'm waiting for the last chapter of your fic :)
Thanks for your support my dear :)

[yumi_usagi]

I like it XD The little ansgt and happy ending is my favorite type of fic ^^ And you wrote it beautifully. It's also cute and hot too :D
Thanks for sharing!
I can't wait for your next fic XD I love both your Matsumiya and Sakumiya fics. I think why don't you take turn, since this one is Matsumiya then next one is Sakumiya :D How about that? ^^

[lakukuli]

Mine too :D
the end was it too hot? i wonder maybe I should had write a fluffy ending
I was trying to do that but sometimes I mess up the order ;)

[tsuki42]

I loved it! It was so beautiful~ from the beginning up til the end! And everyone's personalities were so realistic and human, I really liked how you wrote them! <3
I'm glad they had such a happy ending, even Sho because I want to believe that he also fell in love again :)
Thanks for writing & sharing! I really enjoyed reading this fic! :D

[lakukuli]

I believe that too, and he'll always remember Nino with affection :)
Glad you like it, I'm still suffering with the choice of words and thanks for your comment :D

[momokan69]

Ooh, I really love this, it ended very sweet and romantically <333
The angst have a very good portion, and JunxNino development is in really good pace, Sakumiya couldn't be together in the end, but sometimes love must let go like that ne... and moreover you wrote in beautifully *sigh* And lovely smut <333
I do think you really have improved very well, and you always came with a good plot *claps* I do hoping I could write and and improve well like you are >.<
How about Matsumiya~? So much matsumiya moment lately and Matsumiya has been invading my mind and my sleep XDDD Btw, what about the DomyoujixTaro fic? :D Hope you don't mind I ask though..XD
I enjoy reading it very much! Thanks for sharing! (^ ^)

[lakukuli]

So happy you love it like that :D I too feel like I'm doing better but I still have a long way to go
You can write and improve, my first fic was so simple you can see the difference right away, it takes time and perseverance but you can do it!
If you want I could edit it, even if I'm still not that good
I feel sorry for the D/T fic, I was telling my friend about it as she was also having problems writing Tarou, still don't know how to fix it thought... but it's still on my mind, hope I can put my hands on that soon, I promise to try, but first I want to finish my multichapter, I was dropping that too and now to save it maybe I'll re-write it from the beginning
We'll keep in touch okay?

[momokan69]

Yes, I'll do my best! Hope I could start writing again (>v<) Thank you so much for your support! :D
I see, I do hope to read that actually since you first mention it hehe hope the progress could goes well! :D
I'm looking forward to your multi-chapter fic, too! I do love it too (and still curious about how Jun actually met Nino) :D
Sure, we'll keep in touch! (^ ^)

[qeedivertido]

:'( Broken Sakumiya me pone triste!!
PERO, el Matsumiya fue muy muy lindo!!! (y el smut estuvo bueno XD ) Como fue desarrollandose su relación <3 y lo tierno que es Jun!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 Sigo sintiendo lástima por mi amado Sakumiya y la historia fue triste, pero hermosa y con final feliz, así que está todo bien :D (honestamente no sé cómo haces para que me guste Matsumiya pero lo logras XD )
La próxima un poco de Sakumiya?? :P o lo que sea me gusta :D

[lakukuli]

Gracias :D lo siento por ti, porque sé lo mucho q amas a Sho, pero sabes q en yo también lo quiero mucho, así que puedes estar segura de un Sakumiya pronto, pero antes quiero avanzar con el multichapter q tengo y otros 2 requests q cumplir
Matsumiya es tierno, acabo de ver el último VsA con el Titanic moment :D
tú ya los viste?

[qeedivertido]

trabaja tranquila, yo leo lo que escribas :D
No lo vi :'( tengo que esperar a que los subtitules porque no los entiendo :'( o sea, lo puedo ver, pero adivino lo que dicen XD