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[lal_balu]

Please ignore. This is actually a comment in response to this conversation, but it's long so i have to post it separately.

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[azangru]

> it seems you were more interested in matching hers up against your expectations ("universal approach", "come up with a different term", etc etc etc) and you expected (like it's a piece of fiction) to come out with a pleasant feeling at the end (not a "deeply unsatisfying" one