Comments | lala_ii: Writing is HARD!

lala_ii

Writing is HARD!

Apr 17, 2010 21:54

I officially suck. So does the english language. I spent a half hour- actually, probably an hour- looking up synonyms for the word 'groin', and there are none. And so I moved to synonyms for 'vagina'. When I realized I was considering using 'pink velvet sausage wallet', I gave up. YEAH ( Read more... )

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animeshen April 18 2010, 20:52:46 UTC

Read more het smut, you'll find LOTS of clever synonyms for genitals. Also lots of terrible ones. Thesaurus.com has no suggestions. I think it is a prude.

lala_ii April 19 2010, 00:10:59 UTC

I tired that first, but was unsatisfied by how slowly it was going. The short ones are all not good enough, and the long ones you have to LOOK for the porn, which may or may not be what I wanted anyway. So I tried the shortcut. Which was all bitches. So.... Any recommendations for good fingering scenes? XD

animeshen April 19 2010, 00:34:22 UTC

XD XD XD I am NOT having this conversation with my little sister. This is just too weird. Its weird enough you're writing a sex scene for me and I'm going to enjoy reading it, I think I go to hell if I also help you write it XD maybe I can just link you to some good scenes so you have less research.
here, This one has bunches of well written PWPs, theres bound to be something useful in it.

faerylore May 12 2010, 18:08:19 UTC

crotch, loins, 'juncture of the thighs', between her legs, vague references to 'sliding her fingers inside of her' (if you're talking about fingering), 'touching her intimately', twat... I can think up a bunch of others, but they all make me point and laugh when I read them... like 'mound', 'folds', 'center of her femininity' etc.