Depart From Me: 2/3

[lalalive23]

Title: Depart From Me
Author: lalalive23
Pairing: None
Rating: R
Warning: Blood, body modification, references to mental illness, references to dissociative identiy disorder, possession, religous references
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse. This never happened. Could happen, tho. Bless the future.
Feedback: I LIVE FOR THE APPLAUSE APPLAUSE APPLAUSE
Summary: MS

Comments

[tamarelmensdorp]

"He’s eaten loneliness and swallowed its cavernous waste whole. The boy with hurricane eyes has decided to love him into a demi-god and now he finally trusts himself." Omg, I think I said it before, and I'll probably say it again, your way with words stuns me. It is so beautiful.

I don't even know what to say. This is such a beautiful story and so beautifully written.

"‘If you do this, you have to promise you won’t kill me again.’ "

[unseparatedtwin]

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[chess_boxing]

Jesus I forgot how PAINFUL this is to read. Not, like, emotionally painful (though it's hardly a god damned picnic on that front either lmao) but just every description makes my back ache. It makes me actually wince. Each word is SO harsh and sharp and the agony he's in is fucking tangible. I mean, this is a roundabout way of me saying that it was actually great to read rn because I ended the chapter with actual relief that I am merely ill and overdramatic lol. I AM NOT IN PAIN LIKE THIS. EVERYTHING IS FINE

[nuraicha]

I usually stay away from horror stuff but I gave this a go and I am happy I did. As always, your writing is flawless and this is filled with glorious angst <3 Very interesting concept and gripping Belldom dynamics. I need more!!