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Preaching to Sinners on the End of the World (2/?) part 2

Jan 23, 2012 18:12

Title: Preaching to Sinners on the End of the World (2/?) part 2
Author: lalaljay
Pairing: outcast!self-conscious!Frank/popular!Gerard
Rating: Mature/NC-17ish
Warning: Language (if that even counts), Brief conversation about suicide (don't worry I don't kill anyone off), the things NC-17 would have you assume
Disclaimer: I've never bought a group of people ( Read more... )

word limits are gross, frerard, doing this?, do i have to keep, frank/gerard

Comments 7

kitkatpwl January 24 2012, 00:12:13 UTC

Wow....I'm actually so in love with this story!
It's sort of funny really, because it's such a cliche topic, ya know? Highschool Frerards? And yet, there's something about this that literally has me hooked!
I'm a HUGE fan of insecure!Frank, so already, this is a winner! haha

Your writing is wonderful and I sort of love how even though Gerard is popular, thus far, he isn't an asshole...I like how Frank is gushing about Gerard and everything that's happening, but it seems more natural - it was about being actual FRIENDS at first, and only became more, really, when Gerard kissed him...the whole thing becomes believable because of things like that. Nothing is rushed - it seems far more plausible.

Great work! I can't wait for the next update!

Cheers
Kat

maddyb3 January 24 2012, 03:08:34 UTC

I Love this story so much, you dont even understand! (or maybe you do seeing as you wrote it :)) Please update soooooon!

flowersofwonder January 24 2012, 23:44:56 UTC

I'm in love with your story. No, actually I'm in love with your writing, it's excellent with a touch of clever and funny. No, scratch that - a touch of isn't enough.

Gah, I'm really in love with this story and I can't wait to read more.

awesome anonymous January 26 2012, 06:54:31 UTC

i love this can u atleast put one more

Re: awesome lalaljay January 26 2012, 22:12:33 UTC

Yeah definitely, school being up and running is cutting into my precious writing time but I'm still working on it, the updates will be a little less regular as the back-to-back of the previous two chapters, is all

1_crashqueen_1 January 31 2012, 02:53:41 UTC

I got too excited when I saw this update. And you did not disappoint.

I love how you follow things from Frank's point of view. His dry wit, and his paranoia, the overall tone he brings, it's all just fantastic. It adds so much, like a running commentary on everything. I love it!

Please update soon. This fic is fantabulomazing!