And the magic will end when you truly forget it.

Oct 09, 2010 16:55

Title: And the magic will end when you truly forget it.
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
Paring: Kyumin

A/N: 1137w (must be fate~). This was supposed to be a midnight fic challenge I had with a friend, but things did not go my way. Mom made me get off the computer ;o;. But in the end I decided to finish it when I got up. I used a picture that had a quote that ( Read more... )

fanfiction, genre: angst, pairing: kyumin, super junior

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jianwenk October 9 2010, 23:53:25 UTC
Arrh!why like that D: SungMin!
First time reading a KYUMIN fanfic where SungMin 'loss' the feeling towards kyu ><
Good story anyway :D <3 *give you a cookie*
o btw you can try elaborating their personalities more to perfect it xD

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lalazor15 October 10 2010, 00:42:45 UTC
Really? haha yay for first. \o/
Yeah I didn't really focus on their personalities much because...I don't really know xD

*takes cookies* Thank you for reading! ^^

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jianwenk October 10 2010, 14:21:26 UTC
You're welcome xD
You can try creating it up,it doesn't really matters xD
Good Luck for your future Fanfics xD

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lalazor15 October 10 2010, 21:50:26 UTC
Thanks. I usually take notice of their personality, just not on this one. I wrote this on top of my head, really. I just wanted to get over my writer's block and this came up. Haha. Thanks for the critic ^^

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eunwook13 October 10 2010, 14:38:23 UTC
That was good, buT I can't understand clearly, why Sungmin cried over when the love was gone???
Anyway I enjoyed it ^^

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lalazor15 October 10 2010, 21:48:22 UTC
He cried because he didn't want to hurt Kyuhyun. He may not "love" him anymore, but he still cared for Kyuhyun. I guess part of it is that he didn't want the happy feeling of love to go away. ...seriously,

I don't really know. I just wrote this on top of my head without planning anything. That was a bad plan. Sorry. But thanks for reading it anyways! ^^

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eunwook13 October 11 2010, 11:23:30 UTC
oh i see...

its okay. its still a good fic ^^

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lalazor15 October 11 2010, 19:42:21 UTC
Thank you!

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orangeer October 10 2010, 19:29:11 UTC
OMG. LALA. THIS. *____*
Man, you gotta write more Kyumin fics. Seriously. & this is my first SJ fic I ever read. haha.
/will you ever write me my ebola fic. LOL JK.

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lalazor15 October 10 2010, 21:52:00 UTC
Pwahahaha you.

YOU AND YOUR DAMN EBOLA VIRUS.

I might write you one just for the heck of it. <333

Thanks bb! ^^

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suju4ever_210 October 11 2010, 02:35:17 UTC
This was a nice story, i enjoyed reading this
Broken kyumin always makes me cry, :(
thanks for uploading ^^. Hope we could be friends? ^^

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lalazor15 October 11 2010, 09:15:24 UTC
;~; Thank you <3333
Dun cry *hands you tissue*
No problem, glad you enjoyed reading this.
And Of course! ^^

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maxime260 October 12 2010, 08:26:23 UTC
WAE. WAE SO CRUEL, SUNGMIN ;_;
it was so sweet and then you ended it so brutally... how could you?! T^T
but it was great nevertheless, i enjoyed reading this a lot <3

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lalazor15 October 13 2010, 01:32:08 UTC
I'm sorry bb ;~;
Thank you. <3333
lol omfg you're actually reading my lj fic xDDD

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