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[lan_ting]

¶ and your smile falters (under knowing eyes)
VIXX; Hakyeon-centric Pairing: some hakyeon/taekwoon
Genre: angst i guess
Rating: pg
Word count: 3480
Summary: Hakyeon is beyond exhausted and also hurt but it doesn't matter, for he's the leader of vixx. He would do anything for them if only it meant it would keep them going forever, including wearing

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[lan_ting]

YEAH, I MADE MYSELF HURT WRITING THIS, and I was mad at myself, really. why did I need to write him like this ugh .

( hahahaha, it's good if you can picture it, really. I had a struggle with myself because I really wanted him to take him in his arms, but I couldn't write it it felt off, it saddens me. neo cuddling with taekwoon initiating it would be beautiful sobs )

<3

I'm glad then, if I at least got this right haha. I was so much more pleased with my first scenes then it all went down haha

*hugs*

[kazueh]

Je suis vexée pour deux choses.

1. Je suis pas la première à poster un commentaire.

2. Je pleure.

[kazueh]

On another note, I'd say me crying just represents how well you pictured Hakyeon's feelings since you can totally get in it ? (or am I empathic because he's my masculine twin, I dunno, you know that Hakyeon is one of my "corde sensible" yeah.)

I just... It's not as bad as you think, really. I really love your writing, I admire it, and it makes me feel SO self conscious about my own writing, but to be honest, I would love to read and read and read from you :)

This was uh... exactly in the direction of our late hakyeon related discussions (so many times did we talk about that subject again and again and again) and it hurts.

And it felt really "real situation" like. so. yeah. I dunno what to say anymore, I'm gonna go dry my tears.

[kazueh]

PS, when i said "it's not as bad as you think" i meant it's pretty good (not the best you ever wrote because sometimes you blew me away all text long) but it was really good. :) ♥

(putting leo for neo)

[lan_ting]

And yeah, hummm i guess? I hope so at least. (hahah, that could be too. And yeah, of course I know he is.)

Thank you Clem, really >< . but you really don't have to be self conscious about your own writing though? seriously? you know I love reading what you write, and how you write

[minnie_mized]

this is good♥
i love how you convey hakyeon's thoughts and such. i feel the urge to leave a comment because of this part though : 'He would do anything for them if only it meant it would keep them going forever, including wearing himself out.', since i just happened to read a fanaccount right before i found your fic on vixx-6 on how hakyeon said "you should just do this up until me, i'll be really angry if you do this to other members" to a /fan/ who wasn't behaving during a fansign (which he should have just told her to not doing it to anyone including him). reading this kind of hakyeon, be it fiction or fact, frustrates me to no end and i feel you portrait it well with this fic ;;
thank you for the good read and i'll be waiting for more of your works in the future :D

[lan_ting]

Thank you so much !! ♥

And yeah thank you again. And just...

[quotidianue]

!!!!!!!! I actually love this a lot

Reading your author note at the end, I had to re-read because //what, you're not a native speaker???//
your writing has this quiet, very elegant and sophisticated air about it that just ensnares my attention and keeps me hooked.

I'm loving the way you wrote N and his interaction with the other members, too. I think that it's good that you let the end write itself for you; I think the ending of N not talking but letting the lingering feelings be mutually shared was so perfectly captured by your writing. Just, amazing work and overall it's so beautifully done.

[lan_ting]

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu T___T

and yeah I'm not, I'm actually French.

I'm glad you pointed out his interactions with the other members too ;; not only taekwoon, but also the others, because i put hints here and there of each one of them, and it was important to me. The scene I liked the most was the second one with hyuk and hongbin and taekwoon in the corridor actually, because it's the one that made me think that "ah it's right" the feeling was right, somehow?
and yeah haha thank you. it was just really frustrating to write, and i really had a hard time finding the right feeling but if you thought it was good like this, i believe you !

thank you so much on the whole, for taking you time to leave me a comment, to speak about my writing (really ;;) and everything, you don't know how much it means to me, so really thank you !

[quotidianue]

Ohmygoodness how did I not realise you replied? I swear I checked lj-

Aaaa! I learnt french for two years but I quit and don't remember anything TT Your English is as good as a native speaker's, seriously!

Yes! When I read the scene with N chasing after the giggling dongsaengs I was just //ohmygoodness this is so on point, I can SEE this happening//. I know what you mean! Sometimes when writing you have a rough idea of how you want a scene to go, but then once you actually start writing, your characters take control and write out their story for you. It's so precious when it happens ;v;

Definitely! I think your ending is so great. You know, because life isn't about having a clean ending? Stories usually like to end with certainty THE END, but I find that it's just as effective when you end a story with a small note of finality with space for the future; THIS IS THE END OF THIS CHAPTER, BUT IT MAY CONTINUE IN THIS REALITY. At least, that's my way of seeing it ^^;;

You're very welcome <3333 I love commenting when stories have me

[lan_ting]

it's alright it's alright, really !! i'm sorry myself for replyign so late, i was really tried a first when i saw your reply then delayed and forgot i'm so sorry, but HERE I AM