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Consequences Be Damned (3/3) by laney_1974

Oct 05, 2010 19:38

Title: Consequences Be Damned
Author: laney_1974
Artist: creepylicious
Mixer: ixcacao
Fandom: Twilight and Stargate.
Type: Crossover. Gen.
Word Count: 11,982
Rating: 18
Characters/Pairings: Clone!Jack O'Neill, Bella Cullen (nee Swan) and the entire Cullen Clan.
Warnings Character death (kind of)
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Twilight characters belong to Stephenie Meyer. The ( Read more... )

vampire big bang, cbd

Comments 8

creepylicious October 6 2010, 08:08:29 UTC

Even if I did tell you that I like your story already, I'm making a habit of commenting on stuff I like, so here I am again.
I really liked this (you already know all the reasons why) and recommended to my friends as well.

laney_1974 October 6 2010, 09:15:36 UTC

Thank you! It means a great deal hearing that someone who doesn't like a particular fandom but still enjoyed the fic. I really appreciate it.

dream_mancer October 6 2010, 17:14:00 UTC

I don't watch Stargate, but this fic was recced to me by many of my flist, and I decided to give it a chance.

I really enjoyed it and I was jumping up and down when I read that you wanted to address Bella's consequences in a logical way. In my own VBB, I do the same, with a bit more poking fun at the Twilight fandom, but I love how Bella understood Edward more in the end. Truly excellent.

laney_1974 October 8 2010, 07:38:38 UTC

Thank you so much for your feedback.

I felt kind of cheated by the way the book showed Bella's life as a vampire, so I decided to write my own version.

Again, thanks for the review.

dream_mancer March 4 2011, 00:53:44 UTC

Would you perhaps write a sequel? You ended this story absolutely perfectly, but I would love to see what Mini-Jack could come up with since he has a ton of military experience and his older double has beat the odds before.

laney_1974 March 5 2011, 02:05:50 UTC

I can definitely say that a sequel is planned, but I decided to distance myself from the fic a little because it was hard to maintain Jack's constant anger.

That being said, there will be a sequel (perhaps a long one) which shows Jack's plan of action as well as some oneshot involving SG-1 and Jack once he's past his newborn year.

jo_anne_storm October 8 2010, 16:26:48 UTC

Damn. I love the realistic view of what Bella's life would be like, and what was wrong with all of the Twilight books. You took the teenaged fantasy and made it adult. With mini!Jack thrown in!

ybkaren November 30 2011, 23:37:06 UTC

This was so good. I'm gonna agree with a previous reviewer in that you took a shallow teen fantasy and gave it the mature ness it needed.

I would defitely love to read a sequel with Mini Jack in action. Maybe the Cullen's could actually use their powers for good fighting the Gould or those space vampires in Atlantis. :)