Ooh! A classic Sue for Van Helsing (oh, and ricochet boyfriend Dracula)

[lang_ea]

 Saw this treat just off a fanfiction site I knew for quite a while and love.
Normally, sloppy writing and bitchy Power Sues make me seethe and grumpy when having to describe and gripe about them, but even though the writing's not even bad (actually quite a smooth and soothing read in its descriptions), for some reason I actually miss the Sues of

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[shoysrock]

Oh my sweet lord

[yaoihuntresse]

Some Sues at least have an entertainment value (in a drive-by a car accident kind of way). I'd use the first two drafts of Faithful Hearts (aka Faith of the Heart) as an example.