Humidity | Damon/Elena | M | ~4500

Nov 06, 2011 01:20


Humidity
Damon/Elena | M | ~4500
'Can I tell you the rest tomorrow?' Elena wakes up before dawn to some realizations of her own, and she and Damon conquer them together, only to confront them in the morning.( have i been good to you at all? )

tv show: the vampire diaries, fanfiction: damon/elena

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slayerjenn November 6 2011, 00:26:40 UTC
Beautiful story - and I echo the sentiments of brokenbell that thank god you continued that scene!!

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laniaaa November 7 2011, 10:55:38 UTC
i'm glad you think so! XD

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laniaaa November 7 2011, 10:56:03 UTC
(personal rust, then! ha)i'm very glad you liked it :)

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personaleclipse November 6 2011, 00:38:57 UTC
jesus, I've been waiting something like this since I've watched 3x08 *.* this fic is so amazing and beautiful^^

She wonders if he's ever been loved like this before.
this is my favourite line because sometimes I wonder how elena really feels about damon. I mean we all know that he loves her, and he would do anything for her, and we want them together so badly, but it would be nice to know what does elena feel. 'cause let's face it, we don't know much about that other then that "pity-kiss" which wasn't even a real kiss...

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laniaaa November 7 2011, 10:57:37 UTC
everything you said is pretty much my thoughts exactly. god, when she turned to him in that bed after talking about rebekah, like, 'yes elena. you are also talking about yourself.' and this is all going to come to a head and what is she going to do then?

this show.

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personaleclipse November 10 2011, 18:42:34 UTC
what's she gonna do? I tell you what. nothing! because this is elena, and she does nothing -.-" I mean she can piss me off sometimes so much... especially when you can see poor damon just waiting for some kind of response from her, and then nothing...

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laniaaa November 13 2011, 01:12:21 UTC
like, i get this is hard for her, and she is only eighteen (and that is kind of why i love her so much) but you know? these things with damon - whatever it is she feels - she needs to do something about it, not just let them fester and grow and ebb into something that could be potentially disastrous.

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ahamilton1976 November 6 2011, 02:06:28 UTC
That was so beautiful. I am so glad you continued the scene on. I was definitely left wanting more when the show finished. Love, love, loved how Elena made him listen to her and admitted that it wasn't just a one time thing or a booty-call. The lines: "She wonders if he's ever heard them before. She wonders if he's ever been loved like this before."
were so sad to me because they was so much truth in them. If this is you rusty then I don't know what to say because I thought it was absolutely perfect! I can't wait to read what else you have for us. I'm still trying to get time to get to all your older stuff since I'm still pretty new on here. I do love your smut & kink that's for sure ;)

XOXO,
Ang

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laniaaa November 7 2011, 10:58:54 UTC
i wanted more after the show finished, too! i was looking for stuff online, like, come on writers! i'm glad you liked it though! XD

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ashley2980 November 6 2011, 02:13:17 UTC
I agree with everyone here, I see no rust whatsoever lol. That was awesome, I hope there is more

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laniaaa November 7 2011, 10:59:53 UTC
(eek, i'm totally proclaiming it to be personal rust, then!) i'm very glad you enjoyed it :)

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ashley2980 November 7 2011, 22:40:14 UTC
I enjoyed it very much! :)

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